Still, it was cruel of Freddie to have Carly just before Sam comes home. I guess this story is partly OT3, if we look closely.

If there's anything I hate the most about dashes of Creddie in my Seddie, its these versions where they sleep together (much worse when Freddie sleeps with both Sam and Carly) and Freddie has a son by Carly. But your writing and most of your works are honestly my only exceptions.

I don't understand this... did freddie make out with Sam?

Nice, love this story

Hsjiugheuvhjbwj your story has pissed me off:(! Like, really fucking pissed me off-.-! I hate the idea of Carly cheating on her husband and the idea of Carly sleeping with Freddie in the first place, never mind the fact he's sleeping with both at the same time. If he's sleeping with Carly why did he want to start a relationship up with Sam, meaning he'd no doubtedly sleep with Carly because he clearly has no conscience regarding that.

I love your writing style, but I hate these versions of Carly and Freddie. Really really hate them.

I loved this story! You had such a good sense of the characters, even back in 2009, when they were still 14 year olds in the story. Very in-character, even during the moments when I felt the urge to pull out a scorecard to understand who was with whom, and when. Fantastic work!

I'm dying! DYING! And the blood will be on your hands!

Just kidding...sort of.

This is nuts I'm literally so thrown off I now have no idea what is gonna happen next...another testament to your suspense writing prowess!

Seriously...I'm hoping the next chapter doesn't send me into cardiac arrest.

OH MY GOD! I officially hate Freddie! A testament to your excellent writing I suppose.

But what is with the running Freddie and Carly are assholes theme? Does this go deeper than what we see? lol

You sneaky,sneaky bastard. Make some Smut outtakes!

LOL sweet revenge! that was awesome...

haha... good ending... on to the epilogue

Haaaa... wow... your mind is freaky! I love it. I have to learn how to do things like that. I never plan things out that far!

now on to the next chapter

haha! carly is off the hook right here! I am loving her... she needs a man damn it!

wow that is so convoluted its fantastic... reading on.

did they really have time or did she want to get caught by a two year old?