FAN!

yeah, went and read this on your DA. the small print in the description made me laugh XD i don't believe (for lack of a better word) in censorship. if you read something you either read all or none of it. same with watching something or looking at something. -shrugs-

"'And what makes you think I had anything to do with it?'

'Because I know you, and I remember the look on your face when I told you it was my brother who used to put blinding spells on me.' Hayner replied, a no-nonsense tone in his voice. 'Not to mention he flinched whenever someone said your name.'

'Well, if you saw him, then you know exactly what I did to him.'" I totally lawl'd right there. sounds like something I'd do XD on both sides.

~Evelynn

So awesome! Nice!

I liked it very much but would you mind explaining it to me why you deleted the lemon..I mean a lot of stories are doing that, but I haven't seen anything about it...I'm just confused...can you explain it to me

Of course Seifer would beat up Hayner's brother. -_-;

Really cute story!

Awwe, why'd you remove the lemon? D:

xD

Cute story though. :D

All my brothers are over protective saps. :/

Mainly my one older, got sentimental on me once, saying that he loved me, I was he little sister and he'd always be there...

Was one of the freakiest/scariest things everr. xDD

Oh, yes, love the story. xD

Darn you ffdotnet! I'll have to find time to read the full fic on deviantart later. Anyway, this was really good! I like this universe! There were a lot of typos, though. Since this isn't the full version, I probably wouldn't worry, but you might want to go back and edit it on the other sites you've posted it. I can't think of any specific examples now, but they're there. I think one of them was "can't" when it should be something else. Sorry I can't be of more help... _' Anyway, I really loved it overall and I really like the plot. Seifer should threaten Hayner's brother every once in a while, just to make sure the message stuck. lol Thanks for writing!

Hayner's brother did deserve that, heh. And if that doesn't cure Hayner's fear of the dark, nothing will. :D

-Kiki

Lol much love! *high fives Seifer* I like the continuation of this series - it's fun.

I so love this universe in your stories I love it, I love it, I love it. Seifer is so adorable! All like, yeah? I'mma beat the shit outta your bro cause he's a meano! BAM.

And Hayner's like "Oh... kthx, you're awesome."

Loved the blindfold part... Though I'mma gunna have to check out your aff for the lemon.

Still, it was really cute.

Do you have a character envisioned for Hayner's brother, or is it just a random OC? I always see Zell for some reason. Probably cause he and Hayner are a lot alike xD Makes sense they'd be siblings, I guess but that could just be me.

Ugh. I gotta go study latin.

Thanks for the update! I love your stories.

Love, love, love.

- Axel's Roxas