This should be labeled as, Pathetic Edward/Tanya and a smidgen of Bella.

Seriously, this is supposed to be Bella and Edward? All Edward does is think about Tanya. I've never seen Tanya's name in a o/s as much as this one. Annoying.

Loved it!

Interesting to see things from Edward's POV.

More please

Wow!

I truly love this story, your writing, and these characters! Thank you so much for them all. I went to an Arts high school and took some art, including Figure Drawing, in college. This story brings back so many memories and feelings for me! I hope you finish or get published someday.
And Chihuahua was my favorite beer back in the day!
Tiffany

I've waited forever to read your story hoping it would one day complete. I still think it will be worth it though. So far I'm in love.

Great! D Looking forward to knowing more about what's on Edward's mind )

well that was something but also confussioning did Jasper and Edward both date Tanya? He seems to be obsessed by Bella,and what's with Bella's statment

your fic ASC is amazing... the complexity and realism of your characters! your chapters flow one after the other, the story unfolds beautifully...so please bring me hope and say you'll finish ASC!

So bummed this story tailed off... I really loved the character development, especially Bella's - she has a lot going for her. One of the aspects I disliked of Twilight is that Bella was always just waiting for Edward and didn't have any real hobbies or skills of her own (until she became a vampire, that is). Your Bella is a good antidote to that image - disciplined, creative, and saucy, to boot.

The descriptions of the creative process are sublime, farkle. For a spreadsheet-dweller like me, it transported me and made me appreciate creative types. I've often walked behind some of the Academy of Art students on the way to class (I work in the financial district in San Francisco) and have wondered what they were thinking, what kinds of lives they must lead, and what inspired them. Your story answered some of those questions.

I had to laugh at your mention of the Roy Rogers Museum. It used to be in Victorville. I grew up in the town next door and it was one of the only fun things to do in the desert! My dad used to take us. It freaked me out to see the stuffed Trigger. The estate of Roy Rogers has since packed up all of the artifacts and moved the museum to Branson, Missouri, where I believe maybe it will have more of a draw.

I also enjoyed your chapter titles, and I feel like I learned something by reading this story because I looked up each of the artists. Some I knew, and others I did not. I've seen Chuck Close's work at MOMA in San Francisco and loved it.

Thanks for the journey and I do hope you pick this up at some point in the future. I was really hoping they would meet up again in North Carolina - that Edward's travels would have taken him to her door, in the woods, teaching art to kids.

Best regards to you and thanks for the story.

LunaBlueCA

Hello. Cool outtake. I can't believe he made a bootleg of the Bella/Emmett video for on his laptop and kept watching it! (He's a closet perv!) Thanks. Suzan Noerr

This is just great! Loved seeing this from EPOV. Really didn't realize that he felt this way. You've really managed to capture him through your words, he seems so genuine. Please update soon!

That point of view Edward was really interesting, so "male". I really like this chapter. As in midnight sun, it gives an other relief to your story, an another deepness. Unexpected but sweet, attaching, sensitive.

Reading this make me more sad to know that your story Will probably never find an end, except in my head. Thé fact is that i really enjoyed to know YOUR end ( i hope that my english is understandable). I hope that nothing awful happens to you so that you stopped this story who seems so important for you. I wish you good following in your life.

Scarlet ( from Brussels, Belgium)

can u please continue this. I really enjoy the original but it's cool to get Edward's view of everything. I really want you to continue this and please go staight to the next chapter because i really want to know what goes through Edwards mind when Bella asks him to model for her. And i really want to tell you this and ASC was dipped and is covered in AWESOMESAUCE.