I wish it was a bit longer because I know that Hermione felt the panic rise inside of her, but was it because she liked Fred or because she didn't think that he was serious? Or because she didn't want Fred to like her because She liked Ron? It was good considering it was only a few lines long though

:)

You'd think something so short wouldn't say much, but I actually really like this. Nice (:

I love this little moment in time.

I just wish there was more. :)

Keep writing!

indeed it would be a shock but still who wouldnt jump at the chance?