Great one-shot of Jane and Alec. I loved hearing how they were turned and saved from being killed by the villagers. Keep up the good work.

Great one-shot. Very captivating. I loved every word. Keep up the good work.

Nice:)
Really entertaining! And really detailed:)

Very intense! Great!

Interesting story, I liked it though did you know that Jane and Alec were originally pshchic twins that are met as babies. he let them grow up with their parents bu the villiagers were scared of them and began to burn them at the stake. Jane wanted to inflict her pain on others and Alec to escape it, that's how they got thei gift. But it's still good, I'm just an accuracy freak. Check out my stuff too

:O Woah that was INTENSE!

I LOVE LOVE LOVED IT! SO AWESOME I CAN HARDLY SPEAK! :D

BRILLIANT WORK!

That one is definable as a wow. Are you going 2 write more chapters?

I thought this was a great entertaining story and also I wish Stephenie M. Included much of how Jane and Alec were created and more about the lives The Volturi lived. Since I enjoyed this story a lot I finished it in seven minutes. You should write more of these short stories! I really liked this one ALOT!

Okay. I watched the video-wiierd. Didn't care for it much. Honesty, sorry but i am old school. The story was very good and I did catch the references to the song and True it did work. But the video was weird. I love the details in the story though.

so amazing! can not believe you can write this stuff! i tried btu failed epicly!

this is really good, i like it. well written! (: