You cant leave it there! Please update!

Welcome back! Loved reading this chapter and am so happy that you decided to continue posting on this story. Looking forward to what’s to come.

I love this story. thank you for updating! next update when you can please x

Whenever you are ready.. we will be waiting for the next chapter!

nothing like a pandemic to make you write this story again Haha. thank you for returning, I want to know how this finishes!

Can’t wait for the next update

So glad you are back love this story can’t wait for the next chapter!

Welcome back! Another great chapter you turned out. Glad to see you still have the gift to paint a vivid picture with your words. Once again the characters come to life.
I loved seeing the gang, but it is always nice to visit with amber!
Keep well and write as soon as you can. Thank you

[Heyyyy 3 sorry I'm late, I had a Monday that lasted two days. Excited for Midnight Sun though Jennifer is right about the cover. They could have done a pomegranate that doesn't cause revulsion. The seeds are beautiful! ...Oh, apparently murder hornets are bred because people eat them? Is there anything people WON'T eat?! Aren't the breeders worried about them getting out and killing THEM? They are their captors, after all... Anyway, on with the review.)

If anyone is the king in perpetual check, it's Aro, not Renesmee. I don't see a good way out of this for him. He either dies or comes out MUCH less powerful which to him is probably worse.

Renesmee understands he wants the wolves too, not just the Cullens - "guard dogs"! With her, he'd catch 'em all.

The one he wants most - Bella - is the one who has zero respect for him, not having grown up in that world.

Nice bringing in the red and white chess pieces of the BD book cover!

I love Renesmee's view of humans. It's fair. She's intellectually honest. I love that.

Oh lord, Amber's angry face?! X D Who could keep from laughing at that? Sorry Ambs, I love you but wolfmother though you are, fierce is not your thing.

OK, OK, I know a "True Blood" scenario isn't gonna happen, but I still think they have a good idea to gather as much data about vampire bodies as possible. Not only to prove they should not be exterminated if they ever have to, but so they maybe can treat vampires who are currently thought mortally wounded. And Renesmee's kids - they'll need as much information on their health as they can get. The first one really will be the first one, she won't have a Nahuel to show her what her future is. The pregnancy too, I doubt the caul would be made of a material impervious to ultrasound like Renesmee's was but still alternative techniques might be needed.

"Make sure he doesn't do anything too stupid." Now where have I heard that before? X D (I do hope both Edward and Jacob are self-aware enough by now to see their similarities!)

Aww, I love Seth so much.

"Care to explain why you're not a giant dog at the moment?" Hee. Bella's idea is a good one and her reasoning is sound. And I mean, it's not like the wolves in human form are ordinary defenseless humans.

Aha, you do mention "guard dogs"!

Edward's right, Bella contributed pessimism too - though Renesmee's sardonic side is all him (and I love when it comes out, especially with/against him!)

Awesome, a mention of Bella's strategizing during the Victoria War! She is a good general. It makes sense she was the one to read The Art of War.

Edward has a good idea too about not shielding. And I honestly don't think what he'll see will bother him as much anymore, not just because they're married, which is part of it, but because the shift in his perception of them has begun. He may not be aware of it, but it has. He's starting the process of seeing them as another grown-up couple. These people have a long, long time; eventually Edward will see Renesmee and Jacob more like he sees Rosalie and Emmett and less like his child and a boy he watched grow up.

They brought Pehuen to this? How big is he now?

Oh Maria, don't ever change.

Our revolutionary friend was a freelance vampire during the Civil War? Now THAT's a story!

So there are far fewer Volturi than there used to be... the rot came from within and we are just the barbarians at the gates, finishing them off...well, well, look who's here! Aro will try to play it that Sulpicia and Athenodora came because of the importance of the occasion, but we know he needed every vampire he could get. And oh, Jane, this is NOT going to end well for you.

THANK YOU so much for doing this and I'm sorry you had to wait for my review!

Fun update. Good cliffhanger

Is it ok that I want a new chapter asap?! Anyone else already impatient?!
What I am the most impressed with this story is the maturity you have conjured within Renesmee... out of all the stories i have read she sounds the most mature and what I would imagine a child of Edward and Bella to be like. She is independent, fierce yet loving and her humanity comes through her mistakes and how she handles them. She is far from perfect but she has evolved through the story and has grown. Looking forward to the outcome of the confrontation! Thanks again

Thank you soooo much for updating! Read this in one breath! Hopefully we won’t wait as long for the next chapter! Please keep us entertained during this quarantine... still best Jake/Ness fanfic out there in my mind! Keep posting as we are eager to read!

What an amazing chapter.

Ahhhhhh and to think I’ve been going through my favorites and deleting ones from wayyy back when. I was waiting to reread yours! (Sorry I’m leaving this review without even reading the new chapter-but restarting LIT now!)

Please consider giving us an ending to this story! I feel like all the build up and the work you put in it deserves the final chapters! There are still many of us who are waiting for you to finish!