Finding out Gaara is a girl, then immediately thinking what her undressed body would look like? Then nosebleeding? What the hell? This does not seem like Naruto at all. Who the hell does that? I know it was probably for slapstick comedy and to progress Naruto's opinion of Gaara, but it seems hella forced and unrealistic.

Using his trip with the Pervy-sage as an excuse for his pervertedness? That literally never happens in Canon, and seems like every time Authors do this, they're just trying to justify Naruto's actions.

I know this review is redundant and kinda useless since this fic was made a LONG time ago, probably the reason for these outdated tropes, but I will just keep it here anyway.

Awesome story! I really love it but I hate the way you portrayed Naruto in this chapter. I absolutely hate how you made him look so pathetic in front of Kankuro. I understand that it was needed for the story but still... Anyway, other than that I'm really loving it!

forgot how awkwardly adorable this was

I am sorry to say but just because you change the gender of Garra to a girl where many change Naurto into a girl does not mean the pairing isn't going to have that yaoi feeling even if you claim that it is not yaoi. It is going to be based on how the two interact and does Garra interact differently now that you made him into a her. So as I am sure you may have already come to notice not everyone is going to believe that this is not yaoi just because you claim that it isn't.

Nice story glad to see Gaara even if she is without her bijuu doing ok anyways keep up the great work!

fun fic!

OMG This is too cute! I love this story!

I want to apologize for my previous comment, I didn't read the author's note at the bottom of the page. So I didn't realize that there was a sequel; Please let me apologize!
I Kelsey Dragomir formally apologize for my stupidity and for my neglect to read all that was written!
Love the tired one
Kelsey.D

Its been 7 years since you last updated so... please tell you're not or did end here I really want to know what happens!

great story !

Slowly edges away from Kankuro* (0.0)

Completely incorrect. Kankuro admitted in the manga he has absolutely no aspect of which he can defeat Naruto in of which Naruto knows how to do including stealth and assassinations.

Lol that look Tamari must have had on her face when she thought Garaa and Naruto were gay xD

Hilariously, in the manga, turns out Gaara actually got stronger when Shukaku was removed because Karura's spirit was able to interact with the sand more efficiently.

"Did the Akatsuki do that somehow?"
"Yes. They outfitted me with tits. I haven't the faintest clue why- suspect I never will..."