Reviews for Not Your Average Day
my 2 guys chapter 1 . 10/3/2018
that was good keep the chapters coming
my 2 guys chapter 1 . 8/17/2018
that was good keep the chapters coming
Guest chapter 1 . 3/19/2017
Hinata breast is big!
LW12 chapter 1 . 5/20/2014
good story
llazo4108824 chapter 1 . 5/27/2013
I love this fanfic so very much.
ili777 chapter 1 . 2/18/2013
I knew something was fishy with Jiraiya, wasn't expecting Hinata to be in the trick though
nice lemon btw
tk04 chapter 1 . 8/8/2012
I read it and love it. Very hot.
Patriot-112 chapter 1 . 12/27/2011
Dude, AWESOME!
Kiki242 chapter 1 . 2/27/2011
Good story but I think Neji would probably be mad if he saw his younger cousin in that situation. He might have just attacked Naruto.
diamondeyes3411 chapter 1 . 7/21/2010
I love it!
Rindiny chapter 1 . 7/10/2010
lol
The Unknown Twinkie chapter 1 . 4/28/2010
Awsome story dude.
TEMAITA chapter 1 . 4/21/2010
I love it there so cute together :)
kiuibi123 chapter 1 . 4/11/2010
chuu! this was awsum! BELIVE IT!
Wolfie-Wa1614 chapter 1 . 11/30/2009
Good LORD! That was your FIRST? Sounds like you must be really into pervvy things! I write a lot and I've never really come this close to perfection (But I personally hate the word pussy...) and you did so very well! I was like "Damn, she's like... Jiraya or something..." (and that's saying a LOT, cause I get called Jiraya by a few of my friends that know Naruto and like sex and a friend of mine actually calls me "Pervstar" cause I actually have "Customers" which reminds me... heh... oops...) Anyway, I personally dislike the whole boob-masturbate thing that's kinda odd in my mind... would you reply back please? :3
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