I like the story.
So are the pups doing okay

good storey but one thing after new born puppies are born they need o nurse on tere mom for 5 weeks

my condalgences to your dog... and it is an amazing story you did a great job. INFINITY OUT

I re-read this, and I loved it, I don't know what I was talking about in my last comment, it was very much possible that I was on crack. (not really, don't do drugs.)

I like this series, after reading the others in your series. they're cute, and good to read, but you typewith very little emotion, and I feel like it takes a large chunk of how awesome the story can be.

It was a great story

Not bad at all, though I think you could have slowed down the process a bit. I saw a potential for a grand story here, but there was not enough life in the words if u get what I mean( I'm not sure I do...) slow down a bit, describe feelings and situations a bit more. But all in all, you should write what YOU want, so consider this just a friendly advice, I didn't even come up with it myself, I learned this from a good friend on these forums.

Silwer-Paw

You should make another one like this, but have Kirby and Saba fall in love or Ralph and Aleu fall in love.

Man its better and better!

If you read carefully through this site... I belive tis is the first time Kodi actually got pups... And here I hoped I would get that honour... well well, its about time it happened anyway ) great chapter.

Silwer-Paw

I love the new chap. Maybe in on could you make Aleu came back and fall for Ralph?

How many of you are on the Balto Source? This story should be posted there if possible.

My little secret, I laughed when Dusty fell-which is odd cuz I'm not evil.(I think)

oh ** you are so ** awesome, this is a ** good story and I can't wait to read more.

P. ?dead?WTF?

I like the story. There's a flaw or two in the sentence structure and a minor cliche here and there, but I like it all the same, especially the way Kodi looks after Dusty, even in little things. And besides, I plead guilty to harboring some bias.

Memory Verse:

Romans 2:27 And he who is physically uncircumcised (i.e. a Gentile or non-Jew), if he keeps the Law, will he not judge you who though having the letter of the Law and circumcision (i.e. being a Jew) are a transgressor of the Law?