ahahahah...that was hilarious...

oh. god. I laughed so hard. This is truly amazing. ANTI-TWILIGHT FOREVAH

Die Eddie!

INcindio!

i applaude you makeing through all four books, I only made it through the first and skimmed the second. I love the fourthwall and bashing plot you have going on. Though I wish you would leave the shapeshifters alone, I kind of think they are the only thing resembling decent. Do you think you can make a cullen vs wolves voluti. The mary sue gary sue romance is making me sick...

Haha this is so true!

Hehe that was funny

I bow to your twlight bashing genius

ROTFLMAO OHMIGOD this is soooo funny! Hurray for Twilight bashing - You're my hero...

You know, when I first read your description of the book, I thought you were talking about Tom Riddle's diary, which had magically copied itself somehow (mainly because it was black). But then, chess pieces? Edward? Yeah, it had to be Twilight.

There were a few strange grammar errors.

1. "They've known each other for years, plus Edwards a dick!"

Should be "They've known each other for years. Plus, Edward's a dick!". Especially the contraction "Edward's". You forgot about that.

2. "his IQ dropped a fifty points or so."

That "a" there doesn't seem like it belongs. You should remove it.

3. "It…it will be ok Ron,"

"OK" is capitalized, otherwise it should be written out "okay".

Overall, this story was extremely funny to read (at least the first chapter as I see it now - I presume that the subsequent parts will be even more hilarious).

this story is rediculesly funny right more

This is beautiful... A work of Art and a million times better than the Twilight series. Thank you. *sobs at the beauty of it all*

After reading your a/n I have to say that chapter 3 is funny. I love twilight bashing and am eagerly waiting for more Jacob bashing (I loved the bit at the end of the chapter where you highlighted how gross the relationship between him and the baby is).

Like you i wasted a week of my life reading Twilight-but it was kind of worth it as I find your fic funny, which I woukdn't if I hadn't (if you get what I mean).

I came across your page when I was re-reading a fic by lucifersdraco...so glad I did. This chapter is hilarious!

Nice one!

*laughing*you are my favorite person. I live in Utah and not to mention the Twilight idiots outnumber me.*sighs*But now there is this!I love it! Harry Potter is so much better and Stephan King says so.