First of all, THAT WAS SO FREAKING BEAUTIFUL! That’s it I have nothing else to say?

I simply love your style of writing. If I were much of a writer, this is what I would want my work to read like. The images you weave are just beautiful and so believable. You don't make these two ardent young lovers because they're not. The fell in love over a decade and they have an easy, warm love. You are just fabulous.

Lovely...as always.

That was just so beautiful, I didn't want it to end. Such lovely, lyrical prose; emotions evoked so skilfully, articulated so elegantly. Wonderful concise and in-character dialogue, also. I completely love this!

Absolutely lovely. Thank you for writing and sharing. - Jenn

Sigh. Lovely, just lovely. An excellent vignette of that first night at the cabin. I'm quite certain that it happened just like that. Thanks for writing.

Huzzah! Well done, well spun, and well spoken!

I adore Sam and Jack here-we-are-now this is our-moment-of-truth it's now-or-never and they consummate their love. I like your version. Just enough tension before Sam breaks the ice and I like her thoughts as Jack tenderly yet passionately makes love to her. Hey, your words and my imagination are priceless.

Beautifully sweat as always, I so love your Jack and Sam, Becca

Excellent and so very sweet.

Oh, this was beautiful with just the right descriptive words to paint a perfectly believable picture of their lives. Well done!

Loved it. It definitely gave a familiar feeling to their actions. Like intimacy was there even tough never complitely accomplished till the end.

Really great. Thanks.

That was so sweet. So well written. Thanks for sharing.