Please invite me too. Great story.

This is lovely! I just love it!

Totally not the ending I was expecting, but that means it was a good, original fic. I like those. c:

there's no point in trying to sound all sophisticated when reviewing a story so lemony, so. how do you write your shit, man? that was hot as hell, original as fuck, and funny as shit. i ask because i'm trying to write a lemon right now and failing pretty miserably; i actually included the sentence, "'nigga, bring me to climax? please, you wouldn't lend a crippled crab a crutch!" what do you say? reveal an old trade secret to your buddy in need of some skill?

Nicely written. Also, very hot. It's also different for me to see Kenny and Kyle as a wedded couple since most fics I read have them in their teens. I'd love to read more from you.

Oh.. my...

cool:)hot nicee:D

Although Kyle was taking the womanly position, which I'm usually not a fan of, I enjoyed this oneshot. Not only was it a threeway pairing, but it was an original threeway pairing at that. Your descriptions were also good. I liked the inclusion of the little details such as the fading paint on the wall. I hope to see more from you in the future in this genre.

LMAO

You make my smut look entirely inadequate, babe. ;D