Reviews for Fighting Heart
Miracleboy5200 chapter 11 . 7/12/2010
His domain? what does that mean? Does he have spies in the Fire Nation?

Who the heck is a Shadow Minion? Can they bend the shadows?
Miracleboy5200 chapter 10 . 7/12/2010
So sorry it took me so long to review this.

This is such a heartbreaking chapter. Ursa is probably going to be killed, and Sokka is missing. It looks like it's up to Aang and Toph to save the day. I feel so bad for Ursa and her sacrifice for her one, and only, son was admirable.

I found no typo's in this chapter.
KraZiiePyrozHavemoreFun chapter 11 . 6/8/2010
creepy shadow man...
AnnaAza chapter 11 . 6/7/2010
Uh oh. That cliff does not sound good.
saturdayinthemiddleofaugust chapter 10 . 5/26/2010
HOMG.

Sorry it took me so long to get around to reading this chapter, dear! Nevertheless, I enjoyed it- SO MUCH XD!

"Yin Yang couple"... .

And the Zuko and Ursa scene... O.O whoa. Effing amazing. You have me on the edge of my seat, hun. Please update soon D
KraZiiePyrozHavemoreFun chapter 10 . 5/9/2010
wowz...so many loops, twists nd turns.
AnnaAza chapter 10 . 5/9/2010
That was emotional and very deep in a way! Ursa's different-less kind and nice-but I like it. It's dramatic. Good job!
watercrab chapter 10 . 5/9/2010
Interesting chapters! *Sorry this is late, life got in the way*

I wondered who attacked the Southern Water Tribe and why Sokka was kidnapped, there's a reason why he's missing. I guess Ursa is not as bad as she seems. I still don't like her.

Good job and update soon!
saturdayinthemiddleofaugust chapter 9 . 4/26/2010
O.o suspense. WHY THE CLIFFHANGER Dx? You are effectively making my mind go berserk. You should be proud.

"I don't need a babysitter!"

"You're right. You need a warden."

XD
Miracleboy5200 chapter 9 . 4/22/2010
Oh crap, has Sokka been captured? Has he been killed? Dear lord the suspense!

I'm glad to see Aang is able to let go of his grudges and try to save his friends.

I never would've though Azula and Mai would ever be able to sit in the same room together let alone go on a mission. I pity Dr. Izo, who seems like a pretty reasonable guy. Just someone who seems to be at the wrong place at the wrong time. Will we find out more about him in the future chapters?

What's Azula and Mai's mission?

Mai has to seriously learn to let go!

I found one typo: Katara felt just like another one of those ant in a maze.

Have fun on your trip!

MB5200
AnnaAza chapter 9 . 4/19/2010
Oh no! What's happens to Sokka? What's with the Shadow and Azula? Tense chapte!
saturdayinthemiddleofaugust chapter 8 . 3/30/2010
HOMG.

Cwista, dear, this was absolutely my favorite chapter yet even though Zuko got utterly pwned. You have written Ursa as such a... a badass. And I love it. I truly truly love it xD. But she needs to change her attitude on the Zutara relationship lol ;D.

And the Sun and Moon Destiny was the Zutara themed cherry on top ).

FANTASTIC xD.
Anonymoose13 chapter 8 . 3/27/2010
Wow! Cliffie! I like it! However, wasn't Azulon Iroh's father and Sozin was Iroh's grandfather? Just a thought! Can't wait forthe next update!
KraZiiePyrozHavemoreFun chapter 8 . 3/24/2010
yayy! another update! wowz... ursa has got some problems-and secrets. yayy! i love that ur puttng in a legend that binds them together.
watercrab chapter 8 . 3/24/2010
I'm really not liking Ursa (and I know I've said this a couple of times)! Why is she setting up Zuko? What is her motive? Why does she hate Katara (did Azulon do some brainwashing in the past?).

A little confuse about the sun/moon destiny. I understand the story but I don't see the pieces of the puzzle that Aang figured out. It's late maybe I'm too tired to see them.

But does this have to do with Katara going crazy?
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