I love the technical details of this story - you definitely know the right stuff ;)

-scurries off to make a banner-

I'm sensing some UST. On to chapter three :)

Intriguing :)

I'm going to make the banner when I finish all the chapters! Edward's cute. And Bella is quirky. This looks like fun.

This story has such a great beginning, wonderful story line. Are you going to continue?

it really needs to live on. Thanks

I like your story. Are you still updating?

I just stumbled upon this story, and I must say I am intrigued. I can't believe you don't have more reviews! The writing is excellent and I can't wait to see where this goes!

Snog is an awesome word that I never use. I should use it more. I didn't know it pre-Harry Potter, because it almost never comes up in Canada. As soon as I heard it, I thought, that is the perfect word for two teenagers trying to eat one another's face off. That's snogging. :D

I have to ask, do you do this for a living? I can't imagine researching this well enough... I never considered trying to put Bella and Edward into my work situation. That could be interesting...

I was out on vacation and nearly missed this update in my out of control inbox.

It nearly made me weep.

I so love these characters and the story that's developing. I can almost feel the sweat and mud on me as I read it.

So...any chance you and your beta can forego real life and just publish these chapters every five minutes or so? ;-)

I really enjoy the way you describe the setting. It's a real gift you have. This line stands out for me: "It was a little like someone, maybe a thirteen-year-old-boy at a beach picnic from some idyllic and imaginary childhood, putting an ice cube down the back of my shirt." Thanks for writing!

This is a great story. I hope to see more from you soon!

This was great. Now maybe Bella won't think he's not interested in her? I bet she will be shocked with whatever you've got up your sleeve in the next chapter. Is there any chance we'll get EPOV, as well?

Great update, looking forward to the next :D

Everything made sense, and of course I noticed the snog bit, but then I've lived in Britain, so it's not a foreign language to me.

This is sweet and goofy and humid and I like it very much, great work so far. I must catch up soon...

Man you really make me feel like it's hot and humid here. I think I should be sweating after all that. Liked that E didn't go for the ring (I probably would have, lol) Liked the respect vs. budget issue. Looking forward to the evening at the house and a chance for them to focus more on one another. Thanks for posting.