Well, this was an interesting story to read.

Love the concept of Vampire!Naruto and Fem!Haku as a vampire. Was looking forward to seeing my girl Anko get changed.

Not sure what site UFF is, would love to see if this story gets continued.

our now revealed vampire was feeling - That part of the sentence is terrible.
out where it was coming other… was pure agonizing pain. - Same as above. Terribly written.
Devil himself and returned as a vampire.

Other tales speak of a man - There shouldn't be a paragraph when the same person is still talking. No breaks for a separate person to talk no paragraphs.

I'm not going to bother with the rest of the chapter. Interesting plot, poorly written.

Aw what!

They dead

I know this may not ever happen in this story, but I just want to say that I wish this story could have some Hellsing Ultimate Abridged elements.

I'm confused so by timeskip do you mean that day or what a 2 thing is why id narto get marred

I Actually think this is a very good concept for a Naruto Fanfic. I may have only just found this story but just from reading the first chapter I think it's great.

A shame that it looks like you gave up on the story.

van helsing is a shitty mindless action movie with bad cgi and a dull plot

I love your story! I really enjoyed reading it over 5 times. I like how you made boring old Naruto into SUPER-STRONG-VAMPIRE-THAT-WILL-MURDER-YOU-IF YOU-PISS-HIM-OFF Naruto.

Not bad. It was good, too. A little bit werd.

Actually NaruHina is the Cannon pairing according to the Naruto site I went to. Now it could be wrong and I totally respect your opinion but I really just wanted to throw that out there.
P.S. It had all the pairings too. So it wasn't a fanship website.

Didnt Kyubi get rid of the other weaknesses so why does silver still hurt him?

Great plot and chapter

Overpower naruto