I have stayed up all night reading this. I think it was largely well done, and just what I was looking for - something fluffy, but with good plot. I really liked the twists you threw in, like Ron losing his memory!

One critique that is fixable but would require time, which I understand is hard to commit to a finished work. Nonetheless, I hope you take it someday. There are grammar and spelling errors littered all over your creative and descriptive writing, and it's a shame because it's distracting.

Second critique that has to do more with the themes: there is a very strong message of "sex/beauty is power" used both positively and negatively in this story. I do understand that confidence goes a long way, and you were trying to portray Hermione as blossoming into a mature confidence. But I found the theme troubling at times because I know not many will recognize it for what it is. I'm not sure if there's a way to "fix" this, I guess I just wanted to voice that it can be problematic when this narrative is reinforced.

But again, I enjoyed this story enough to sacrifice sleep! I love a good redemptive arc, and there was some genuine character development that was heartwarming. You poured a lot into this story, and it is easy to see. Thank you for writing!

this has all my favorite tropes and the scenes are just *chef's kiss* perfect

Whoever wrote this, you've served this world very well

therrs something missing from this story.

I'm screaming I've never felt so called out, I wear oversized clothes and I'm a 32C lmao

No sorry good story but I think you don’t realise that you’ve just had an 11 year old date a 15 year with a 14 year old pining after her that is just WRONG my sister is 11 and I’m 15 and if she was dating a boy my age I would kick him in the balls faster than a snitch flying across the quidditch pitch

Okay, I knew what a mimosa was.

I always find this fact that Draco blames Ken instead of Hermione, after she said she find him handsome, nice.

oho I get the idea where this will go *evil smirk

the characters and world building were almost had no taste of JK Rowling's magical world, but the story is quite lovely and I always think draco is cute for sometime.

uh.. is this still the wizarding world we know?

I am reading this for the third time, it is sooo good! My absolute favourite fan fiction of all time, the plot rivals JKs, I love all the fashion the hilarious characters! Thank you, you’ve made my day- again!

DEFINITELY A SWEET AND WONDERFUL STORY! I especially loved that scene in the Room of Requirement. I eventually couldn't get off the song 'Kiss Me' after it happened! GOSH! I am fangirling right now!

Great chapter

Sang every word to ‘jump’ lol

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