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Ahhhhh please update I like this story so muchhh

This story is very interesting and innovative and I really hope you will have more interesting chapters in the near future soon since this story is getting good! Keep up the good work man! Hope you will finish making more chapters in the near future soon!

More!

PLEASE UPDATE
ALSO, Kakashi is a jonin, would it not make more sense to have him wear a jonin vest?

update this book is so good

Hey, I just read chapter five. Your story is pretty funny so far. There are a few things Id like to ask: 1: I googled the name HISOKA and it was always marked as a boys name. Is there a reason for that? 2: Isnt -chan the suffix for a girl/female person (that youre close to) and -kun the suffix that teachers/adults use for (little) Boys and friends for their male friends? Im not sure about that...
Well...thank you for your story
PS: Unicorns are real;-)

Very nicely written! I can't wait for the next chapter!

For sine reason u never update ? :(((

I'm sorry its really bugging me. It's chan for females and kun for men. Never have I heard a girl called kun. I've heard boys called chan wen they're tiny children I think that's the only acception. Pleeeeease change this x

i noticed you haven't updated since 2009... so this is probably in vain but please PLEASE continue! i absolutely love this fanfiction. something ive noticed is that for every 10 or so terrible fanfictions their is always that one that makes you believe in today's teen writers again. yours is that one so PLEASE continue for the good of all avid fanfiction readers!

Update soon, please.

Oh my gosh best dang story and I can't for more so update it! :) or I'll be sad...

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It's a shame that you've stopped writing this, you know. It was definitely interesting and well-written.