Hey, I like your story a lot, but something that has been bugging me is the grammar. It gets a little distracting sometimes, but you could probably fix it if you read what you write out loud or run a grammar check on your computer every once in a while. Great job with the plot though!

Your story is wonderful))

I'm really looking forward to what will happen next))

Please update soon ! ~

MWAHAHAHAA...I'NM HERE TAH RULE THE WORLD! :D

rima/shike/hanaru: 0.0' that was majorly random.

me: DUh. heheh... thank you for this chap! xD loved/still lovin' it~! oh and my com is FINALLY FIXED! *happy dance*

reviewed~! x) - my friend says that this smiley face is super fat coz he/she/it has ALOT of chins. lols.

ha ha i disliked him in the story before. but now i dont dislike him like that. just that he is with Rima right now! but i still like it. i am glad for the update : )

yeah! still waiting for the return of shiki man!

I am glad he can fight i was afraid you would make hanaru weak or lose and be embarassing or something!

I so sory! i havent had time to review and even read your chapters! :( no excuse right. well forgive me...i like it ha ha...i am glad my story is of some use to have started you to write a fanfic. i am like you too just write and let it flow. don't be discouraged by low reviews...

hmm...why woulld that be? its just my thought but i personally don't like Hanaru. As a character, some people probably dont like it when there are other characters besides vampire knight. i personally don't either but hey if the storyline is good then i will read! like yours...

so much turmoil and pain. I repeat...I DONT LIKE HANARU because he is taking her away from Shiki man...wtf? keep writing and updated...shes in so much pain but yet she is loved by so many...sigh! that must be awesome... : )

please update soon

It's been so long since I read a fanfiction that gave me that funny feeling I like. I really like this fic. It's a good break from all the crack fics I've been reading lately.

Very nice. Anyway , please update soon

at least you updated...in the next mnth. *sweatdrop* gambate on your work and all! :D

reviewed~!

uh oh? 0.0 merry christmas rima! though it's not christmas -.-''

reviewed~!

IM SOO looking forward to reading your next chapter.

Great chapter 3! Shiki saving her was amazing! But...there something odd...about him...maybe it's just me ahaha

geesh!cant wait 4 the next chapter.

you have in interesting storyline! where did you get the idea? ha ha i have to say i almost thought you would want to say sing, but dance is still good. lets just see where you go from here with this plot...