This story was really nice and cute. Thank you !

I can't believe I just read this chapter while sitting in a Best Western Hotel room. It got me really wondering about my budget. That was awesome :D
Anyway, it's a great story that I'm enjoying so far.

This is very good. My heart was hurting for Neal and his loneliness and his fight within himself. His loneliness for Kate was genuinely painful. He loved her and she ran. He really wanted to run but he knew he would lose Peter and WC and NYC. It must be hard to manage that instinct to run, which I imagine he has had since childhood. The way he tied up Peter was very clever. And the way he and El worked together to bring it to conclusion was lovely. He needed her support. This worked very well. Thanks for writing.

fascinating story

I really enjoyed reading your story! I think you portrayed the characters accurately and your story was exciting and fun. :)

And you just gave yourself away.

WOW
that was so sweet!

IT WAS GORGEOUS!

LOVE!

Holy crap. that last line. woah. wow. I. wow.

That's BRILLIANT! I MEAN! LIKE! THAT IS SO PETER! AND DEEP!

Neal did make a lot of sense. he tried but he set it up basically so he'd fail. He coulda left without Peter have ever knowing. Very clever. I love El lol

This is sad. I feel so bad for Neal. He's treated like an animal and he's not even violent.

Poor Neal. There was so much distrust in season one.

That was cute. Loved the story. Seeing Neil through Peter's eyes was fascinating.

That was a great story. Do you still write and post somewhere else

I had read this story a long time ago. I've re-read it and it's as good as I remember it. It's definitely one of the very best White Collar fanfictions I've read. The plot is fantastic, the pacing great, the dialogue believable and Neal's internal struggle great drama. I really love this story. Thanks.

A satisfying ending to an engaging story with some of my favorite characters. Great job, Mojave Dragonfly! I laughed out loud and held my breath. :)