I tried to read chap. 5 and I couldn't

love it!

I rarely comment on lemons. But, your beta should have caught the error of numbers. Think of it this way, a Coke can is approximately 3 in. wide. By spreading your fingers apart, most people get about 7in. Most people's hands, from the base of their thumb across is 5in wide..
Now, keep in mind the Coke can, cause hands are flat. You must think, or find something like a Big Gulp cup to understand the idea that Certain things are round.
Sorry for the implied criticism.

Okay, I knew the smut was gonna be trash as soon as I read one line so I ain't even wasting my time with it.

"OK so I like this story. But to have Harry nearly raped while he has extra magic and his wand with him almost made me drop this and not look back."

SAAAAAAAME. Like wtf? You're just making him a wimp? After all the rubbish about how much stronger he got? I get that you're making Harry the sub here but really? Harry has a personality? And it's not fucking being just a sub.

love love love love!

Lovely story! I really enjoyed reading about their relationship and how they became a family. I will definitely read the sequels you post. Read you soon in another one! Kisses!

yeah man i tried but i just can't, sorry. not my cup of tea.

hehdjqudjwid i'm crYing HARRY WOULD BE SPLIT IN HALF?

i'm laughing? no dick is that big?

I LOVE IT!

Thanks for sharing, I'll go check it out ;D

***Pyrane***

Loved it

Ouch, even knowing about Harry being a masochist, that must have hurt like hell. The anal tissue is so tender and taking Sams huge dick in addition to Deans must have torn him. Especially without prep for taking both (the finger imitate the girth of the penis, and three fingers don't equal two dicks.) and it being a first for Harry. Furthermore he hadn't bottomed for quite a while...

I like the idea of the story, but this scene was ... I liked the beginning

Thanks for bringing in Bobby, he was always my favorite of their mentor-ish characters.