Omg this was so sad! I cried when Astrid and Walter died :( I'm glad Ella pulled through, I agree with Peter, if Ella hadn't gotten better she would have been consumed with trying to help others and wear herself down. this story reminds me of the movie contagion.

omg! this is so good! i love how it starts off so innocently and ends like that... and i love you for not killing ella lol

Another good one, in spite of killing off Astrid and Walter. Reading about Astrid's death was so painful, only to have it topped off with Walter getting sick. I like that Ella lived. I think Peter was right that Ella surviving is the one thing that let or forced Olivia to carry on, and I was glad to see that the three of them were doing just that. Another excellent piece that made me cry!

OMG! awesomg, like totally awesome! i read it during school and came home and read it again! please more, pretty please!

I liked the plot and what makes it even scarier is that this scenario could actually happen. Well, without the other reality and such:) Great story!

Sad, but brilliant.

Wow. Wow. So dark, but so good. So well written.

I really think you're one of the best Fringe writers on the site. Thank you so much for sharing. :)

I had a really hard time reading this, the fact that I was crying didn't help any either... But it was a good story, any chance in continuing? Just a thought.

Thanks for a great read,

~ZeusFluff~

I almost didn't want to read this for obvious reasons but I'm glad I did. I really liked it...tragedy but, a very good tragedy :)

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