Aahhh this is so sad where's my happy ending?! ?!

Good writing, but horribly depressing haha

Oh my god! Why does it has to be so tragic. I want a happy ending

For me this is one of the best kwms fics ever. Bless your soul

People like you make me sad. You obviously have a gift for writing. Your creations keep us in suspense, being most of them are one shots. Short, sometimes sweet, sometimes bitter, you have a way of twisting words to create master pieces. I wish you would continue writting. You are probably very busy with your life, but I just wanted to remind you of this world and how much I wish you would continue writting. People like you make me sad because like a field of flowers, the best ones are taken first.

This was amazing! The writing the character portrayal the adapted story line i absolutely loved it! (I umm actually cried a little at the end which is impressive cuz usually in stories jb only cry when ppl die so good for you) but ya this was/is amazing! 3

This was really amazing! I loved all of it (and you are awesome with drama, you know). You got to write the next one soon!

I wish you had made the ending a happy one!

omigosh I cried ( ) it's so sad but if a story can make you cry then that means it was pretty good :)

This is so sad. :(

that was awesole, i couldn't stop crying ... please don't let it end like this ! please

Beautiful. Wow. This was just...painful. It was heart-breaking to read but I loved it. The ending hit me right in the heart. Not to mention you wrote this little splendid piece of work wonderfully.

Lovely job. :)

The last line- omg, so good. It was so well written, but... i wish they got together in the end. But your right about love not always finding a way :(

(sob sob) its such a sad story but at the same time its an awesum story as well...:)

This was beautiful, if intensely sad. But sad isn't a bad thing and I think you captured a ton of emotions really really well. It was a fantastic idea and you pulled it off. Great job on this fic :)