Very cliche. Out of character everyone. Bashing and abuse, since it's fine as long as it's funny. Also hypocrisy. "Controlling someone is wrong", then proceeds to control.

I love all the intertwined, yet separate, story lines. Many MANY people fail epically at this. But yours is easy to follow, each separate story doesn't last so long as to lose my interest, and it almost immediately touts into the main storyline. I honestly have little, if anything, but praise to offer at this point. Obviously I'm growing impatient to see sess/kag come to fruition, but that's mostly because I'm always impatient for a happy ending. Lololol! I love this story.

Oooohhhweeeee! That's the sexiest cliffy I've ever read. Lolol

Oh dayuuum kagome! Let him have it girl!

This story is moving beyond compare. And I'm only on chapter 10!

I am loving this story. Not only is the plot good, but there are few, if any, grammatical/spelling errors (a massive distraction for me when reading people's stories). The ONLY mistake I've seen that mattered was in the beginning A/N's when you said "underlined text is past thought." It kinda threw me for a moment when I was trying to differentiate between past and present thoughts vs statements. Other than that, I'm impressed and looking forward to continuing...

I'm LOVING the whole 'A Christmas Carol' Inuyasha-style vibe you've got going here. Honestly, I've read thousands of stories here and this ones on par, if not highly competitive, with forthright in its creativity. I'm only on chp 4, but sto far I have every reason to believe you are a great writer with endless potential. Just. Wooooooowwwww. I'm officially dedicated to the ending.

I cried again. I have to say this is unlike any story plot I've read thus far on FF. I'm in love with it already. I'm crying into my pinot noir and loving every addictive minute of it. Lol

I'm literally in tears.

OMFG this first chapter already had me in tears. I'm hooked.

Damn my heart broke when reading this chapter. He really loves her and is baked his heart to see her so blind to him even in death. It was so beautifully written and so touching. God I love your stories they are so Deep.

Thank God I found this story again!

Quite easily the best Sess/Kag fan fiction i have ever read. Thank you for this.

precioso de veras. enorabuena. disfruto mucho leyendo tus historias. he leido muchas y mas que tengo que leer. me emociono de pensarlo, te animo a seguir escribiendo. saludos.

Your tale is hands-down fascinating and writing style so well-crafted and difficult to find. This epic has exceedingly more sheer depth than a simple romance or adventure, ranking itself up with some of the greats, that I am so glad to only be halfway through, for I will be just as devastated when this story finishes as I have with so many others. The pool of the exceptional Sesshoumaru and Kagome fics is not so deep as I could wish, and over the decade or more that I have been slowly devouring them, I have depleted much of it. I simply wanted to thank you for your undeniably necessary contribution to my personal favorite fiction couple.