great story! I’m was shocked to see how easily you emulated Mead’s writing style.

I can't believe I have never read this story before, AMAZING! I want to go read it again right now.

I think this story takes us into Rose and Dimitri's mind and through pain, fear, doubt, anger, and more, more than any other fanfiction that I've read.

Once I got used to the set out, I really enjoyed it. You portrayed each of the characters beautifully. Loved the story line.

that was good

This is my very favorite vampire academy fan fic . I've read this one multiple times and this is the first time I've read your comments . I don't think I've ever reviewed and I know that sucks . But I loved the evolution of dimitri and how he deals with rose . The pain he feels doesn't stop him from loving her like the other stories I've read . Your very talented for this to be your first . Keep going girl you rock

Your story is so after reading the first chapter I fell in love with it!I know you said that there will be no sequel but please please please consider the idea of writing one...and the best thing I liked about it was the emotional scenes and the nightmares...you are great!

brill love this story

Great job :)

XD INCREDIBLY AMAZING STORY! REALLY LOVED IT! Got kinda annoyed that Dimitri always got the answer outa Rose but he never answered her and she didn't care . but still, REALLY great story, especially when Rose was dying (not the fact that she was dying but how you wrote it lol)

this was awesome! love it

balled my eyes out you are amazing you should be a writer and i for sure would buy your books... :) thank you for the amazing story

Ok I absoloutely love it! It's just so great and you managed to get the characters personalities right on which mist people on fanfiction can't. I love how rose was so strong and trtj g to pit everyone before herself which is really the way rose is and then I admired how you managed to show a weaker side of dimitri. In every story I read he just seems to recover soo unrealistically quick... I love how at first he couldnt come to terms with what he's done and how he thought he couldn't be a guardian any more and how later when the live of the ones he loved was at risk he threw his fear aside and staked his own father! And I love how even thought he was " going throughout hell" he still wanted to stay strong for rose. Also his outburst In the last chapter was awesome. The thing I really admire about belikovs character is that he has these self set morals. He is a bit overprotective. He is wise. As said before he wants to protect his loved ones by taking blame for every single bad thing that happened. He feels he has failed rose when he turned strigoi and all the other things that happened. Whats important is that along with being hot and sexy he is also a true gentleman and such a brave person.
Any ways LOVE your story
Can you pleease write a dpov of when he came and found rose with his rather and she was dying? I would love to know what he was feeling
And last words

AWESOME AWESOME fanfic! I haven't read a really good one in a while:) I hope your YA series turned out well!

Hi,

I really loved this story!

I am a little bit obsessed with VA, and have read too many fan fictions to count, but yours was really different, and had a really different story line!

I think you had Dimitri and Rose down pat, their personalities and the things they would say. The action scenes etc werent overdone, and the amount of Strigoi and Strigoi attacks were realistic (as realistic as they can be)

Loved it!

I love the emotional parts! It really gets too me!