Reviews for An Intriguing Proposal |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Hey, there I absolutely LOVE your work and this story, but just so you know there are easier less creepy ways of impreginating your OTP, like making one of then a trans male. I used it in a DP/VM fanfic, it's a LOT easier to explain. Kisses with honey and chocolate drops. |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is still one of the best chase x jack stories |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ah, reading these stories is so entertaining. Slash stuff is always entertaining! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cute, amusing and intriguing! You did it again! And now, I gotta sleep! Chack all the way! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cute! |
![]() ![]() ![]() EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE! AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! I HAHAHAHAHAHA NEED HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA A AHAHAHAHAHAHAA A-ANOTHER! |
![]() ![]() ![]() LOVE! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is a great story. I really like how you made Jack. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love it when he monologues too |
![]() ![]() ![]() :( I honestly loved this story, but the baby being a girl kind of ruined it a bit. It really makes no sense to me how if two GAY men have a BABY how the baby would be a girl...they don't have any female genes in them or anything to transfer the female sex chromosomes as they are both males and only have the male chromosomes. So reading Mpreg fics with girls kind of annoys me. But I pulled through with this and pretended that it was a boy. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wahhhh soo cute XD ur fics is always wellwritten ! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cute! I would love Jack to be my mother! Annoying and weird he may be, it's better than over demanding mother. I'm jealous of Jae Lan except the over protective Chase. At least he gives more sense than my mom too. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is really really really good! i love it! good job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() :D awesome |