Reviews for Loyalty |
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Orri Some Lady chapter 1 . 5/3/2016 Some Lady: I think this is a good oneshot! Megatron... What are you going to "reward" Starscream with... ? :3 *perverted grin* Orri: Fancy vocabulary, but I wished for there to be more elaboration... But overall, it's still a good oneshot. |
LittleMewLugia chapter 1 . 7/20/2011 Wow...I've never seen this idea before, but is seriously makes sense, it's perfectly believeable! Thank you for a lovely story! LML |
0ptimuspenguin chapter 1 . 7/26/2010 Hehehehe. :) I like this take on the Cons . |
Saberfrost chapter 1 . 1/31/2010 Beautiful, I love the fact that Starscream isn't disloyal at all and it's all a facade, Imagine what the Autobots would think if they found out! |
Eliza Acheron chapter 1 . 10/22/2009 I liked your point about Starscream being a pacifist of sorts- that's what I thought with the null rays too. Good story! : ) |
Koi chapter 1 . 10/21/2009 3 I never thought of it that way~ that would explain quite a bit. Still, Star is quite over eager in his 'attempts'~ x3 |
Amanda Saitou chapter 1 . 10/21/2009 That's a nice start, but I felt like "where's the rest?" Write more? |
Starfire201 chapter 1 . 10/21/2009 Definitely a good "possibility" piece, I'll say that. |
Thing With No Talent chapter 1 . 10/21/2009 This would explain a heck of a lot, wouldn't it? And the ending made me smile. Kudos! |
cai-ann chapter 1 . 10/21/2009 very very nice. i like thi stake on starscreams trechary |
Carmilla DeWinter chapter 1 . 10/21/2009 Do I know about procrastinating on Latin vocab, or worse, grammar. Good luck with that. Anyhow, this is an interesting insight into the 'con hierarchy. It explains the (plot-hole riddled) cartoon, too, so kudos to you. |
Zanzizarr chapter 1 . 10/21/2009 I need to sign in, but.. This is good! Short, but good. It offers an explanation other than Screamer betraying Megatron. Oh, and Latin sucks terribly. We study it at my school too. |