This is so sweet. What an elegant portrayal of Prowl you present every time you write him. I love Bluestreak, he's so gentle and sweet. Someone somewhere writes him with the twins and he's perfect but this is so nice, I can see it so easily. Poor Prowl. Silent and the talker. Very, very nice, Mirage.

I'm not quite sure why I missed this when you first posted.

Anyhow. While this is cute enough to melt me into a puddle, it's also a bit deeper than most of the rest (excepting Drift&Perceptor). You make me want to hug them both, at any rate.

Poor Bluestreak. I knew he’d been the only survivor from the destruction of his city, but he really is traumatised. That’s balanced by Prowl’s kindness, which is fitting since he saved him.

‘The practice rifle fell from Bluestreak's fingers and clattered to the steel floor. Desperate to show his feelings, he grabbed Prowl's wrists with both hands and squeezed, holding Prowl's hands in place.’ – I’d have made the last clause, “...holding the hands in place.”

I couldn’t help but smile at the sudden torrent of words the kiss released!

A gentle story, obviously set many vorns ago; well-characterised; and the important thing is that Bluestreak moves on through learning something important. Learning something new can always change your attitude.

yeah, i never really see these two together, but this story was so awesome! you handled Blue's internal dialogue perfectly, and I love how it floods out at the end. pure love! 3

and to tubular_turtle: you are exactly why people disable anonoymous replies.

Wasn't sure if I'd like this pair or not seeing as how I usually look at the two from a big brother/little brother relationship; but I really REALLY like how you wrote this. Uh...bravo an stuff!

cute story.

An original idea, put across beautifully. And it gets 10/10 for sheer sweetness. And Prowl was really something - even though he's not always my favourite, he starred here :-)

Oh, this was so cute! I'm such a sucker for emotionally-traumatized!Bluestreak. X3

Also, I know it's very late in the game, and you'll probably want to hack of my fingers for daring to type a requst, but can I pretty pretty PRETTY PLEASE persuade/beg/bribe you to write a First for Ironhide and Ratchet? *dangles... um, something thoroughly tempting in front of you*

how come they never interface? better yet, why is there no twins and bluestreak?

AW! Love it! This was so cute! Bluestreak/Prowl is my all time favorite pairing!

LOVE! I have to go read it again!

Aww. This couple is a guilty pleasure of mine, and this was very sweet. Loved it.

Gorgeous! This was just wonderful! Blue probably my second favorite to pair with Prowl and you do so well with his character! I like that Prowl doesn't find it necessary for Blue to say anything and is able to accept that, move past it and realize Blue is more to him than just another Bot. Wonderful!