I really don't like your whoreward

Omg what a frigging gorgeous story!
Thanks so much for sharing, I absolutely fell in love with it!
Just gorgeous. I'm blown away. Wish you'd written more but I can see also why you dropped where you did.
Wow. Thx again!

Holy Hell that was incredible!

Omg, this story was absolutely amazing!

I really like your writing, you don't just go for the cliche descriptions or the much read sentiments.
It was a good story!

I love a dark, (somewhat) controlling Edward and enjoyed your story. Thanks for writing and sharing.

Ah...I see there is no chapter 2. That's ok. The story stands very well on it's own! It's too bad I found it almost 3 years after it was written and not quite in time to vote...

Read on a recommendation, this chapter was exhilarating, exciting, engaging, and quite erotic! I see there are 2 chapters to this story, written some years ago, but no "complete" indication...is there more? I loved what I've read so far...

FATS was rec'd by Fic Central Library. I must confess that I don't normally read "vamp" Edward! The summary wasn't clear but I was intrigued by your story description.

I enjoyed the Hell out of this one shot! My eyes were glued to the computer until the very end - and man oh man - what an ending! Perfect! "Forever." Loved this line also - "It was in fear I welcomed death, but in love found my salvation."

I know it's been a while since you've posted here, but, I truly hope that you read this review. With all of the pull-to-publish in our fandom, if I were you, I would clean this up a bit and see about having it published as a novella. Vamp fiction is at an all time high and FATS contains one of the best story lines I've read! It is superior to many of the stories already published.

Thank you for writing for our fandom. I hope one day that you will write additional stories for us!

Elaine - Sparkle Damnu Phillips on Facebook sparkledamnu on twitter

so gooood!

I read this fic a few years ago and loved it. In fact, I enjoyed it so much that I would think about it on and off when looking for new fics to read. It also took me 4 or 5 months to find where I had read it and to find it again on this site! Very good fic, well written, and the plot is really well thought out.

ooh i like this

Fanfic, or rather my iPod is being a bitch and won't let me long on. But this was quality. Keep writing

that was fantastic, so well written, i just loved it. letting her read the book first, telling her through the book what is about to happen to her was just great. even though he asked her, i dont think he cared either way, he knew what he wanted and was there to take it. i think he was in her room in those 6 month watching her, because she talks in her sleep, he knew that way how she felt about him.

I loved the ending for this! Her reading the ending to the book while he's coming in her window & her knowing and accepting what would happen was beautiful. Like his character in the book, I don't really think her answer would really matter that much to him but he literally delivered his intentions to her front door to prepare her at least.

Great story.