Reviews for White Christmas |
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JayandNya4evr chapter 1 . 12/19/2016 That was adorable! Alfred is just the sweetest little tot ever! C: |
Zeplerfer chapter 1 . 11/25/2012 D'aw this story is really cute. I love it when America is sweet. He would definitely believe Santa could make it snow :) On comment on writing: I don't think you're using 'lest' correctly in the sentence "I honestly have to resume my work lest I wouldn't be able to catch my flight." Lest means 'to avoid the risk of,' so don't need a negation afterward because you're identifying the risk. The sentence should be written as "lest I miss my flight." Also, I'm not sure even England would use 'lest' in spoken English. It sounds a little less stilted to say "I have to resume my work or I'll miss my flight." Thanks for the story! |
fakiagirl chapter 1 . 12/31/2011 Aw, that was really cute. :) They're both so thoughtful. Nice! |
xXLunarEclipse896Xx chapter 1 . 2/1/2010 Aw... Finland is the awesome Santa that should exist. :) I laughed as I read the part about the Presidents writing to Santa. This story is pure awesomeness; just as awesome as Prussia himself. :) |
Sunflower lover chapter 1 . 12/25/2009 Aw... So cute! All your USUK fics makes me feel all fluffy and warm inside~ w |
Ame Mika'zuki chapter 1 . 11/24/2009 Aw that was so sweet! So, so adorable! Hahaha I love that part about the Prez writing, no, not ONE letter, but FIVE. XD haha but aww that's really, really cute. X3 |
Anon chapter 1 . 11/23/2009 Aww... America's such a cute little(?) nation... He's such a nice guy and his boss is really great! Haha, I'm rambling... WRITE MOAR! :D And if I may be so bold, to request a RussiaChina fic? OMG IF YOU GUYS WROTE THAT I WILL DIE FROM JOY. |
Darkgreenfangirl chapter 1 . 10/18/2009 Aw this was so cute |
Green of Four Swords chapter 1 . 10/18/2009 OH. MY. GOD! *dies from the absolute cuteness* *revives* That was awesome! So Cute, I think I'm seeing snow right now! Aw America, you are just too cute and England, you're even more adorable than ever! Would you do a sequel? (It would probably raise the rating) I wanna see what happens when England goes to America's house! CUTE AND SMEXY TIME! Gee, I really can't wait for Christmas... |
Anime Yaoi Lover chapter 1 . 10/18/2009 Kawaii! |
Saina Tsukino chapter 1 . 10/18/2009 aw this was so adorable! Oh, america, never change! now I feel like singing christmas songs~ |
s y n e s t h e t i x chapter 1 . 10/18/2009 “You were asking the President of United States of America to write a letter to Santa?” he asked in incredulity. I totally cracked up right there. This was so sweet. Great characterisation, too. Really seems like something those two would do. 3 |