Well...if there's a sickness in the morning two month later I would give that a read :

The sex scenes were very well-written! To be honest, I felt like those were the best parts of the fic lol. (I don't exactly ship these two together as my OTP, but I can definitely see how Johan is messed up enough for it to happen.)

That was sick, disgusting, and completely twisted. All things considered, it was utterly magnificent. it was so real and haunting; so in character and brutally written; so filled with emotion. My words can't do this any justice in the slightest.

Oh...!no more? it's good you know.

Wow. I think this may be the single best fic I've ever read. It's so hard to find anything... unique... on this site.

Masterfully written, first of all. You have an incredible way with words. The full circle-ness of the beginning and the end was a clever trick. You have a lot of good one liners in there and, in my opinion, you absolutely NAILED Johan's character.

And finally, I actually prefer to read the sick, twisted, and terrifying stories. It's not because I'm fucked in the head... it's because they seem to be the only stories I can't really predict. They're the stories that keep you guessing, have you worried, make you feel actual emotions. They're the stories that literally have you on the edge of your seat, nervous about what's about to happen.

I know you wrote this a long time ago. I have no idea if you're even here anymore, but NOT reviewing or favoriting this story at this point would certainly be a crime.

This is absolutely fantastic. Congratulations!

Intense. I don't usually read stuff like this but...good work.

This is by far the most disturbing Monster fanfic I've read. I can't help but wonder if Johan is as cruel as he is, he might actually made Tenma watched it while he was doing it. That would've made the humiliation even worse. Erm, I wouldn't want to piss someone like Johan any day. I felt very, very sorry for Nina. That being said, this fic is brilliantly executed.

I LOVE this fic, it's so horrible and yet so...satisfyingly...good? I'm not a TenmaXNina fan nor do I love the idea of Johan screwing up Nina,..emotionally and sexually, and yet, YOU MADE IT WORK!

There are some issues that bothers me;

1) Tenma slept the whole time Nina was raped? I know you mentioned about him being really tired of his work and jetlag, but I am still bothered how he didnt noticed Nina has left the bed. I was hoping Johan would have injected him to sedate him while Nina was in the bathroom.

2) I'm confused about Nina's apartment, is this a separate storyline from Twins and Apple strudel (in that fic, her apartment only has one bedroom) or is Nina currently living at Johan's apartment in Munich?

3) Out of curiosity, do you think Nina and Tenma had 'safe sex'? Considering how Johan acted on her without any protection, will Nina be PREGNANT from this? (Srsly, I couldnt help remembering the whole thing about Johan saying 'Your children is MY children too' from the other fic you made) *bangs head*

4) Oh my! Johan gets hard..that easy? *giggles* I guess he's a very hungry monster after all. It never cease to amuse me! teheheeh! xD

5)...'"I will say goodbye to you when we meet again, in Prague.'

Will you be making a sequel from this? *puppy eyes*

This was kind of cruel and angsty but I liked it.

It shocks me that I haven't reviewed this story yet, especially since I've read it many times before.

The prompt itself is very challenging (since I don't believe Johan would ever destroy his sister with such a heinous act) and it's impressive that you managed to pull it off. Not managed but succeeded.

I have to say that the mixture of emotions you put in this fic is interesting-it starts off tender with Nina's love scene but it spirals into fear and anxiety with that shocking scene. It was very heartbreaking reading about Nina's grief and the part when Johan embraced her after it was all done was...it was terribly sad. However it was also intense and well done.

Oh my god! I love this fic so much. It is incest, but it is so fantastically written that you can let your mind dive into the story. You can feel everything! I love it, love it, love it! :D

I am really amazed. This was psychotic but oh so subtle.

I could not help but smile at the mention of the standards of society. Is it that frightening to think the same way as Johan in this case?

But one question comes to my mind: do channels display cartoons late at night? xD

but anyway, this read made want more! xD like all your writings do

This story is undoubtedly dark but it is one for sure of the best fanfics I've read; the events described are cruel but very plausible. Johan's hurt, histwistedness, his violent/gentle actions, Nina's responses and inability to call out for Tenma - and for the reader it is a guilty pleasure to follow. Great job.

I'm really shocked! The scene of inceast is... HOT! Really I never felt so...( wah I can't explain my feelings ! XD )

Aren't you the sister(or brother?) of Johan or something like that?

I've the impression that you totally inderstand he's thoughts.

( well I don't insinue that you're psychotic hein! :)

You psychologically raped me! I'm going to become the fanatic of Aldrae's fic!

My God, once again, you psychologically raped me, by writing this fic! If there was an award for "Modern-Day Stephen King of ", you would win it, hands down! May God help Nina...