That is very sad. Heartbreaking, but well writed. Riku did a lot of things for the sake of Sora, but we never truely knew how he felt about all he had to do. And the way you write him is very coherent, I like it. Even if I'm a high RokuShi fan when it comes to interpret the games, I like very much to read good RikuShi fanfictions. Thank you very much, that's an awesome job.

This was a beautiful piece of writing. I found your insight into Riku's character perfect. The only real criticism I have is with the format. Perhaps instead of - and ~ just use one and for the other use none.

Very good. Emotionally touching.

Bravo

AWESOME~!

This was a really good story.