Reviews for Punishment Games |
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Skillet-Writer chapter 1 . 3/5 You overused the word “then”. |
heichou666 chapter 1 . 3/11/2019 OMG U BROUGHT MY FAV SHIP TO LIFE! thank you sooo mmuch (starts crying at it's beauty) |
Guest chapter 1 . 9/30/2018 It was great |
Midnight chapter 1 . 10/7/2017 Amazing best Ship Ever! |
Guest chapter 1 . 7/29/2017 Small spelling errors here and there, but other then that, absolutely amazing :3 |
Anonymous chapter 1 . 7/19/2017 It was a good story with good concept, however, try to stop using the word "then" so much. Literally counted it at least 10 times in two paragraphs. Nice story, though, keep up the good work :) |
AnimeGirl8457 chapter 1 . 6/27/2017 How could Hikaru lick the cum from Kaoru, they were under water? |
Eyeless Jess chapter 1 . 2/18/2017 Mother of flipping zalgo. I got a freaking nose bleed. And it's a gusher. |
Guest chapter 1 . 2/5/2017 Bondage! |
IzDaSilverWolf chapter 1 . 7/31/2016 YEP. JUST ANOTHER NORAL DAY. HA, HA... |
Hikaru chapter 1 . 6/26/2016 awesome just awesome! |
Whatisotaku chapter 1 . 6/11/2016 I see that you used to much of the word, "Then." Other than that, I loved it! Keep up the good work! |
nathan chapter 1 . 4/20/2016 awesome! O_O |
The Ghost King chapter 1 . 2/3/2016 Now I feel like the girls in the episodes... thanks, I was just getting over my fangirl breakdown from watching them. |
Guest chapter 1 . 11/14/2015 Was good personally think it would've been really good with a scene where Hikaru makes Kaoru take his clothes off but idk that might just be me lol! Other than that it was really good :) |