This is fantastic! Thank you for writing

This is another good story. I liked how Lennox and Barricade had the same idea that they could not show weakness and had to remain useful . . . that's really the only way to survive when forced to work together with a Decepticon, isn't it?

I really enjoyed this story. Thank you for writing it. Barricade is fascinating and it was fun to read something starring him.

I really enjoyed the story. Made alot of "sense"...LOL The only real problem I had with it was the Constant! use of slag/frag...I understand that it was in showing Lennox as endorsing/becoming one with the Cybertronians but I think the words were used even more than the word "the"...just a thought. Even considered doing a count. Just overkill that distracted from the good concept & writing.

Wow, what a great story, thanks! :) I think you caught the characters very well, and it felt neither long nor slow ;)

Sweet. I'm still in tears over "Four Targets." I don't believe I'll ever get over the image called up by the last section of that fic; this one's cute and funny/serious, and makes Lennox a little more real to us.

Good Stuff Good Stuff. I did not see any huge gaping errors in it either, but perhaps that just proves I am a bad beta candidate. Will gladly read more.

WOW! This was really awesome! And I can't believe only 7 other people have taken the time to review this one!

Anyway, I thought you did very well in keeping the plot moving and the banter between Lennox and Barricade.

Keep it up!

so very. very awesome...

Interest Lennox and Barricade interaction. Great story.

Nice. It was sort of a different take on the meme, but I found that I really enjoyed it. How did you get the idea?

Wow, this one turned into an epic! The dynamic you created between Cade and Will is brilliant...snarky Con and plucky human, both trying to survive each other and the impossible situation. The banter between the two is an art ) And I loved Cade having to do a formal surrender to Ironhide. I think Cade will have a much higher respect for humans from now on! And the last bit with Hide offering to stand guard so Will could sleep...very sweet indeed!

Awesome story. I thoroughly enjoy your Will Lennox characterization - you write him really well.

I love your Four Series...and this one is an excellent addition! Your Barricade is perfect and sometimes I'm not sure he's quite as evil as the other decepticons are. You've captured my sentiments here with him leaving Will alive. I mean, sure Barricade needed him to be rescued but still...I don't see any other decepticons leaving a human alive to help them. I guess that might just make Barricade the smartest...

Excellent Excellent Excellent! You definitely write the progression from day to day well. The whole thing is totally believable and I'm sure that wasn't easy to do. I'm glad you had fun writing it because I had fun reading it!

You leaving me speechless here... That was one of the best "four" stories I've read from you!

Really, Barricade's character is facinating and you've written him very interesting! I love how Will and Barricade were still in a battle when they're not phisically fighting.

And at the end I had the feeling that Barricade would be the winner...But then came Ironhide with his "Surrender properly" (Ha!). And this leaves the impression that Barricade isn't the one who is laughing at the end...

So, what's more to say? Continue your lovely series and I keep reading it! ;)