This was a lovely read and was translated beautifully.

If you wouldn't have said that English was not your first language, I'm sure no one would have noticed.

Your writing style is amazing.

xx

Belle

I never would have guessed that English isn't your first language. From the way you wrote and the words you used, you write better than most people who have English as their first language! Wonderful story. I just love how demons can rise just as angels can fall.

Beautiful story! especially the pov of balthazar that was so cute in the selfish/i-know-everything way ! got glued to my phone to the end and I'm really happy to have found it in the depths of xD keep it up

Круто! А на русском это имеется?

So I was just dropping in on this fandom to see if anything was decent and I have to say that you've BLOWN MY MIND! I adore you completely~ This story is everything I could have hoped for. I love your building up of their relationship and how you started and ended.. GAH! This story is amazing! Please continue to write such great stuff :D

-I'll Be Your Lie

I realize you wrote this a long time ago, but it looks like you're still here. Just wanted to let you know I really enjoyed this fic. Constantine is one of my fav movies and I'm glad you filled in the blanks on a good reason he never kissed the girl!

Well... I read this in one sitting and I am utterly in love with your fic. This was so beautifully written and eloquent and the language/speech is so... it flows, dammit.

Truthfully when I saw the pairing, I imagined something much darker. Not that this fic isn't dark; there are obviously dark undertones but I love the almost light-hearted mood this has - the way you wrote it, the words you used really achieved this. Some parts even made me chuckle. You explained abstract concepts well. Very direct and yet very poetic. I think the POV, characterisation, the actual writing etc just pulled me in. I can only imagine the research you did in writing this. I appreciate it.

Thank you for writing this. I enjoyed it.

-Rusty.

Aargh ...

Je pense que si je veut comprendre quelque chose à ta fanctiton ( qui me semple pas mal ) je vais devoir passer un long moment à la traduire. X)

Pauvre de moi.

Pourquoi toute les longues fics sont en Anglais ? n_n'

great story

wow, this is the best story ive read like ever :D

Wonderfully written, very enjoyable. I haven't really ventured into the Constantine fandom previously so this was a great starting point. Almost makes me fear venturing any further, as this was so good, everything else is probably downhill. Heh, oh well. Thanks for the read! :)

Beautiful ending. I'll keep a look out for your other fics. :)

Ingenious. Simply ingenious.

This fic is very interesting, and I can't believe there's only one more chapter. I personally like how you rewrote the scene.

It touches me how tender Balthazar is with John. I also like how you gave a reason why demons willingly enter hell because of how they feel that paradise is no longer a place for them.