Reviews for Family |
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Dixie Dewdrop chapter 1 . 12/28/2010 What a sweet story! |
SemperFi-NavyNCIS chapter 1 . 7/27/2010 Short but sweet :) |
movieholic chapter 1 . 2/14/2010 Aw, that was both sad and very sweet. I loved it. Thanks for sharing this with us. |
MatteaAM chapter 1 . 11/15/2009 real nice. you had me laughing at the last sentence (as you wanted to). xD |
TrueRomantic chapter 1 . 10/18/2009 This was just so darn cute! I love good team fics, especially if they've got subtle Tiva in them. You did have a couple of typos though. And you tagged it as Jackson Gibbs instead of Leroy Gibbs. But I really liked it! Looking forward to more from you. ~Kim |
tvaddictedgrandma chapter 1 . 10/4/2009 VERY good. I liked that a lot! Very much. I hope we see this. |
gsr4ever chapter 1 . 10/4/2009 Nice job. I liked it . |
Gemcity08 chapter 1 . 10/3/2009 I would LOVE to see a scene like this as Ziva starts to heal. I'm a sucker for team dinners :) Great job, and congrats on the good mood :) |
adama-thrace chapter 1 . 10/3/2009 Awh this is a really good story, Izzy. Ancedote (Sp?) Whatevs, it was a really good short story. (" |
Viktorija chapter 1 . 10/3/2009 It was sweet:)I liked this story:)) |
A Fanfiction Angel chapter 1 . 10/2/2009 Great little one-shot. I liked how you portrayed the team as such a close-knit family. Just 2 little typos. " They were sitting in a booth, each of them smashed in their liked kids on a bus" Their should be there. And of course you have an extra 'd' at the end of like that shouldn't be there. Apart from that, it was perfect. Set the mood well. From A Fanfiction Angel |
zatl chapter 1 . 10/2/2009 again. I'm not logged in, sorry. This was cute. :) and I loved the Gibbs' pov. :) It's rare to find those, since Gibbs is so hard to write for... at least he is for me. so, yeah, :) I loved it. and I'm very glad you're back in your writing mood. I missed your constant oneshots and updates. btw, I'm sorry about your family friend. I was going to say that in my review for ATL, but my short attention span wouldn't allow me to remember from the time I started writing the review to the end, so I'm saying it now. |
11nivea342 chapter 1 . 10/2/2009 i love it, though. 3 just him watching his family, his favorite people. |
M E Wofford chapter 1 . 10/2/2009 This was very nice indeed. I really liked it that Gibbs is watching and enjoying them being together and having fun. I can actually see him doing that. |
KaleidoscopeEyes13 chapter 1 . 10/2/2009 So sweet! I kinda felt bad for lonley gibbs... |