I have to wander by your page every once in awhile, I always find something good. The whump always has a point, and a resolution.

What a deliciously whumpy tale! This totally rocked. Plenty of physical and mental whump for Shep and tons of emo whump for McKay. Great stuff! Well done! Cheers! }:O

Raven

Another excellently eery, whumpy story! How do you come up with these fantastically creepy plots! LOL!

Starting with a quote from Frankenstein, John's first scene and a reference to the House of Usher is enough to make the reader's skin itch at a point where the fic is only getting started. Feeling of unease first, plot second!

obnoxiously persistent, annoyingly hopeful, irritatingly pushy

:P

yep pretty much defines Sheppard

bless his heart

Well, this was a creepy fic! Poor John, ravaged physically and mentally by the machine, stubbornly fighting as much as he could regardless of the pain. Worst of all was the things the machine said, the decisions it questioned and the accusations it made. Some of those decisions really were questionable, but I think Rodney hit the nail on the head- it's not about the decisions, it's about the reason behind them.

I'm glad Rodney got John out of the interface and then, despite the awkwardness, got John out of his self-blaming cycle. I think the awkwardness actually highlighted the feeling behind Rodney's words and made it easier for John to accept as truth instead of platitudes.

You were right - Shep whump at its darkest, but what an amazing story line and McKay was the superhero conquering all to save his best friend. Awesome!

Wow, terrific story! I loved the Poe referentes! I also like the aftereffects of the interface with the chair, even if it was because of the other interface. I’ve always thought that chair-related problems would make good fic fodder ;) The computer-creep was, well, creepy! Kept picturing the girl from The Ring, eek! I loved McKay in this one (he’s such a fun character), you have his mannerisms down pat.

I’m quite new to SGA fanfiction, even though I fell in love with the show back in 2004. I’ve been reading fics for about a month, mostly Shep fics (because that guy is seriously yummy!) and mostly your fics, or the ones you’ve marked as favourites. This is the first story I’ve dared review, though, because I’m not a native English speaker, and I’m quite shy at posting reviews ;)

So kudos, and thanks for the hours of entertainment!

Pure awesomeness :D

Love, Winnie :3

What a treat this morning to find a new story of yours! Thanks for another great story!

Fab-u-lous! Whump, Rodney and John, Alantis...sighs...at least we can keep it all going in our own virtual world!

wow heck of a freaky thought to be that trapped.

awesome ...loved it!