God this fic is absolutely glorious. The story building is amazing and the character the development had me hooked the whole time. Hope everything is going well on your end. No need to continue the story if you don't want to, this much has left me deeply satisfied.

It's been years since something made me cry, and that last scene wasn't even that tearjerking in itself but the whole setup leading to it, dammit!

Thank you so much for sharing this

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This story is a-ma-zing. I'm totally in love with it, really, this is one of THE best xovers for FMA and HP, and I can't get enough of it. I especially love how you portrayed Ed. I live how mature he is, while still being himself. It always pisses me off when people make Ed older, but still a little pissbaby throwing a fit at everything. Your story is refreshing with the way he is, and I totally love it. And ooooh how you handled Umbitch is just pure gold.I would love to read more!

Holy shit! what a good fic! Holy shit!

Sorry, that is going on repeat in my head!

But seriously, the plot, the intrigue, the DRAMA xD and the fact that Ed's character is actually a believable progression for a genius alchemist who continued to work in the military! So many people write adult Ed and forget that people actually mellow when they mature, and that he is an honest to god genius.

Thank you for such an inspired version of him. I particularly love the way he transferred his over-protective brotherly tendencies to Harry.

Also, thank you for not making a simple book rewrite with Ed as an add-on.

Your writing has progressed amazingly through the chapters D

Anyways, congratulations on a beautiful piece of literature. If you ever build up to the rewrite you alluded to in your profile, I'll sure be there waiting for every update!

Kudos!

Daah! I wanna know what happens next! I'm hooked! I really am! I can't get enough of this wonderfully written masterpiece and it's so rare to find an excellent story like this on without hours of browsing hundreds of stories that don't seem interesting. It's too bad it hasn't been updated in years but I'm sure you have valid reasons for such. Still, I'll keep an eye on this gem.

NOOOO! Please update! This is a semi-cliffhanger!

Wanna see more please, I love Harry being Ed's apprentice :)

You left it like this...kudos, but please if you can. Finish this.
-Silver

Starts ROFL LMAO. He would be a great headmaster, I HAVE to admit. (;

Me gusta mucho su historia!
Sigo con la esperanza de una actualización!
:)

I'm so sad, knowing that this story is likely abandoned given that it hasn't been updated in over 4 years.

It's really very brilliant and engaging. The plot is unique and the characters are written so perfectly.

Would you ever decide to continue it?

Great chapter and please update

Great plot and chapter

The longer time period between updates is completely understandable, and I thank you for doing this story with all of that on your plate. To be able to do so many things, you must be an amazing mom as well as an amazing writer .