That was awesome. I think you seriously did do a wonderful job!

Again, well written, easy to read and you definitely captured the characters.

Good job )

A great story. Very well written.

love this :)

this was such a great fic

you did an excellent job

I thought this was a very touching set of scenes that would have fit in well with Find My Place. I am so glad you decided to write it. Well done. Wonderful work. I was so very pleased that you participated in the contest. I loved the idea of coupons for Alice and I really enjoyed the scene of Rose and Bella in the bookstore. I also enjoyed Bella having to change after Rosalie deemed her unfit in her previous outfit. That is such a Rosalie thing to do. And I enjoyed that you included the whole family. _ Congratulations!

Hehe! Loved it! Amazing!

And you should be proud! This was really great, and I loved the coupons for Alice. That was a perfect gift.