Haha Its always the sweet ones who knows how to intimidate the best! This was awesome! Couldnt stop laughing for a long time!

/Nice/ one, Mikey!

Ohhhh my goshhh...I love it! _

Great job! Those kinds of people are the scariest!

man i almot felt sorry for the dude and pointy ninja thingys,

blunt,sports related things rotfl :)

LOL. Oh my gosh! Mikey is absolutely amazing! That's something me and my siblings would do! Great Story!

pointy ninja things?blunt sport related things? regardless of that it was really good. i can totally picture mikey scaring the crap out of sum1 like that!

Button! XD

Great job on the story I liked it a lot it made me laugh a lot.

I loved it! Wonderful writing!

*snorts*

THAT was amazing! I loved it!

love the whole 'evil' mikey thing in the new FF series one of the few great things about these seasons or whatever is the dark turtles and to me the scariest ones go don, mikey, leo, and then raph. because don is well a genious! so he would know the most painful tortures mikey is a crazy and his long tongue is super creepy, leo is merciless i get this cold vibe from him not seen on television, and raph well... he'd just pound ya real good and is really angry but more importantly, predictable who knows what deviant torture scheme dark donnie is cooking up or what twisted diabolical way dark mikey will mess with your head or what impassive methods dark leo will use to get info and raph well like i said i think that he would pound on ya and after a while lose patience then he'll kill you or one of his dark bros would come in but great story! dont mess with mikey's older bros or you'll regret it!

Ha,ha! Very funny!

I loved how Mikey "narrated" Casey and Raph's conversation with the PD.

Man, if it was extended his would make a great episode. :)

Great job! And yes, don't we all love shiny buttons?

The 'Martha Stewart' paragraph (first one, in other words) was brilliant. Oh, that was just too much. Already, I'm laughing. Can't wait to read the rest. . .

(Mikey’s eyes trailed longingly over the little device in his hands, lingering over a particularly large, red button. “Hm…wonder which torture device this is…Donny never tells me those things so I always gotta find out on my own…Wanna find out with me?” Love this!) :0) This made me grin.

The last sentence was very funny, but I have to be honest and say that I had to think about it for a moment. Had you included 'bomb' as one of the things the PD was babbling on about and placed somewhere before the 'insane Mike' comment, then the 'remote control' tag would have made it an instant 'ah ha' for me. Instead, initially I wondered why a remote control (don't they all look alike?) would reduce the PD to tears and mindless chattering. Yes, I can be slow sometimes and I need prompts occasionally. LOL Blame my menopausal state of mind. :0)

But, nevertheless, I loved your first TMNT story and have placed it onto my favorites list! :0)

Great job! I can't wait to see you upload more stories. You have a fine wit and writing style, and you certainly have done your homework re: the characters' PP's.

Blessings,

Rene'

Great story! The mind of Michelangelo is a wonderful place and I can see this happening.

wow... that's all i've got to say. _ Absolutely great one-shot!