this chapter make me wanna cry, the word she said 'yes boss' makes my heart shatter in million pieces i am sad for her that she has to let him go and think of him as her boss, and on the other hand i am happy with her because, finally, she became a part of mafia, anyway the scene when dino kissed her forehead to remind her that this is the last time they can do that broke my heart

ps. btw, i love when she called him her boss
pss. i hope dino will change his mind and look at her
psss. one-sided love is always painful

you wrote a very fantastic and funny story for dino x oc, i read it since from the first chapter until this chapter in 2 days, i love their relationship, begin with friend or brother-liked, i love that elsa think of dino like her brother, didnt fall in love with him in the first place, she just wanted the money. I also like your humor sense, i love how dino act and talk with her, like he was flirting with her lol

but i have some idea, did he plan to has her as his fiance at the beginning, i am not sure, he looks like he prepare everything to has her as his fiance

ps. i also like d18 so so much!

This is so good!I love this fanfic!One of my favorites DinoxOC,There are only few DinoxOC but I love this!I'm been looking for more!I enjoyed this!

Great and funny story! Many kisses!

wait... didnt Bel won the storm ring

Reborn you're a pimp.

I'm cryinggg oh ghaaad. I'm so damn in love with Dino right now. /sobs/
This story is wonderful! I love it My heart for Dino pleaaaseee ㅠㅠㅠ I need Dino Cavallone in my life. Like seriously! He's just ughhh definition of PERFECTION.

I really want to know how Elsa looked like, but I can't find the link here. Is there any other way? I'm dying to see her. Eventhough look doesn't matter as I love to think Luciano is good looking - I mean anyone in good side should make us feel good to see them rather than that annoying beautiful Yano. Sigh, actually it's just I love to have reasons as much as I can to disagree with Dino to choose Yano over her if she's actually looking alright and those horrible bullies too (by this time I'm on chapter 30)

ASDFGHJKLQWERT! FLUFF OVERLOAD. OMG, I'M HAVING A NOSEBLEED OVER THÍ!

I'm reading this again oh I miss it :')

i have absolutely loved this story so much, this tool me around 3 and a half hours to read :) i seriously love how luciano and elsa are bff's xD great story :)

As interesting as the title and the summary, oh... I never realized reading fics with OC could be so interesting! Nice job! Of all the KHR char X OC, I loved this one the most!

Hey, man! I know this is a completed story but it was really bugging me when you kept describing Elsa as plain, because from what I can see from the image that you drew, she's anything but plain. But, yeah. Just wanted that out my system! Loving the story tho, so far (:

I was supposed to post my review on the epilogue.. soooooooo...OOOPPPSSSS? Fufufufufufu... Annnnnnyyywwwaaaayyyy... Haha.

Okay I'm gonna be honest here... I never really imagined I would be reading a story about Dino and an OC... but anyway.. This fic is pretty awesome! hahaha.. This fic was pretty funny and I liked Elsa de Luca! *thumbs up* One of the fics that I really REALLY like! Its kinda hard to get over this story...