please update soon!

I love this take on the story and am super excited for the rest of the story

This is such an amazingly written story, and the characters are so well-realized. Thank you for writing!

You HAVE to continue

Ow please next chapter

I read all 4 chapters and I am absolutely loving this fic. The dialogue is extremely interesting and engaging and I find your portrayal of asriel and marisa pitch perfect.
Please update it soon. As u can tell people love his story so continue writing!
U can't just leave it here! It would be great to see how they deal with lyra in their relationship!

That was good, keep up the wonderful work and post more soon.

Great story! Please update soon! You've done a great job with making the dialogue sound British.

~Star*

This is very interesting. It had never occured to me how would it be if these two had met first - also about Marisa's past. I hope to read more soon - I'm excited to see how this romance will unfurl.

wow!

Hello! I just found your story (would've found it sooner if it wasn't hiding in the rated-M section) and I think it's fantastic! However, you haven't updated it in over a year. So...are you going to continue? If not, I feel like you should add an author's note to your readers to let them know.

Again, I do love this story, but if you don't feel like continuing it that's entirely up to you. :)

~*Madelyn Grey*~

I simply love your story! Please update soon. :)

Your story is so different and that's why I like it. And it's one of the most interesting "His Dark Materials" fan-fiction, I've ever read! Can't wait next!

Absolutely love it! Inventive story line, great characterizations, and it just leaves me dying for more. Hope you continue it!

i agree with Happyfeetthatsme its an amazing story

please update soon