Great story! A fun take on Alice and Jasper. And I love Alice and Edward's little jokes about mind-reading and seeing the future :D

Let him be pissed.

Liked him being Alice's bodyguard. It was a nice variation of Jasper being a protector

This was precious! Loved it. - Super cute idea for a story.- Damn, I wish Jasper was MY bodyguard... yikes. :)

I laughed, of course, at the little digs about Edward not being a mind reader & Alice not being able to see the future. :) .. cute.

Anyway, the whole thing was just a fun idea, & it was written so well I could literally see it all play out.
- Great job! :)

So Cute!

i like it!

Loved this, I would want a sequel! This was lovely!

This was a lovely story and very well written story! I love this couple, and enjoy very much your stories about them. I prefer them being vampires, but AH worked very nicely here as well! Thank you for sharing!

WOW! That was amazing! I completely loved it 3

Fantastic job! :D

luv the one shot!

Really good, such an interesting idea. I would love to read more! Well written and it's about my favourite pairing, yay.

Loved the Story :) It's Pure Funny :D

Hi !

I just wanted to say to you that I really love your stories ! I'm french, so I red the translation of "You kept me waiting", and it was so good that I decided to read one of your story in english, even if it is longer for me; This one shot is so perfect ! Especially the moment, at the end, when she is watching the picture, and he arrive. I was smiling in my head.

Hope I didn't make too much faults in my review ...

Continue to write, you are really talented !

Bye !

Oh so sweet!

OMG.

That was one of the best Oneshots I've ever read.

Seriously.

My heart beated so fast, it was great.

Wish you would post a second chapter of how her dad is reacting and how they continue.

Please?

Greetings from Germany!