please continue xxx

:)

first off that shit made me cry
second the best quote is yea so different from daddy,He's hot

idk about this fic. everything just happen in practically the same breath, and everything is mostly all just so... childish. it feels that way when u read it.

edward is such a child! what? he's going to kill jake while charlie is dying and leave bella without a father and a father for her children? what a hot headed child.

i always thought jack rathbone was way sexier than rob pattinson.

Eh

one thing you never want to hear is your honey's ex wife telling you how good he is in bed! my ex husbands soon to be ex wife called me once and wanted to know why i divorced him. i told her the truth, he was the most boring man i had ever had a relationship with.

edward really was an ass to bella, and come to think of it, jacob was even worse! why on earth would jacob marry bella, and have children with her when there was always the possibility of him imprinting and leaving her. didn't any of the stupid dogs learn anything from sam and leah?

well this story was great the ending sucked really hope there was another part to this

I love the story but what happened to Bella? And who was that who woke up from the burn Bella or Charlie? Because the very last couple of chap chapters weren't great I would give it 4out of 5 's

What?!

Awesome, awesome story, so far! Love it! Hope you get a chance to write more

That's such a sweet proposal!

Sweet chapter!