Reviews for Forbidden |
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![]() ![]() I think u should add more dirty parts for Randy and Max |
![]() ![]() ![]() AMAZING STORY SO FAR AND I HOPE MICKIE AND JOHN GET BACK TOGETHER AND YOU UPDATE SOON IT'S BEEN OVER A YEAR |
![]() ![]() ![]() I understand a busy life. I am writing myself and have had a gap in my own posting timeline. I love the story and think you have done a great job with the plot. I can't wait to read more. |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I loved this chapter! I hope you are going to continue with it. I don't really watch wrestling much anymore, but I still love Randy and John. Great job on this. *amanda* |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm so sorry that that had happened to you. But you are a really good author so please continue to write and be strong. |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Love it update again soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Update soon! Great Story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Welcome back! I'm soo sorry to hear what happened, but I'm glad u got out of it, hope this makes u stronger, and don't give on love either. Just have to be more weary of the guys we chose in life! But I'm super glad u back with an awesome update! John and Max r back on track, hopefully Johnny can get to know Randy abit better and if I remember correctly patch things up with Mickie... Lol not too sure I think they were fighting! Lol I need to go back n double check ... Update soon tho .. |
![]() ![]() ![]() First; this is iBrizzy - Daughter of Hermes - remade my acc. to have a fresh start with stories. The other one was getting clustered and stories weren't getting finished.. Second; F U Kofi... no need to hit on Max when she's with Randy and than you dump paint on Randy's nascar.. tsk tsk Sorry Kofi is not on my favorites list.. he's just kinda been too boring for me. :/ Third; Ahh, I'm glad that Max and John had that little moment :) Fourth; Oooo, could she be pregnant? Fifth; Awww, I'm sorry about things. :( I hope you're doing better now though. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Jeez, Kofi, talk about being needy. Yikes. I'm glad that she and John had that little heart to heart. Is she pregnant?! This review is really jumping around, lol. All in all, great job! I'm looking forward to the next update. P.S. Welcome back! I hope all is well for you now! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow...what a comeback. I absolutely enjoyed it. Get over it Kofi...either but out or let Max be happy. She already has to deal with others hating her relationship and she don't need another. When she tells Randy to hurt him...it was pure gold. I didn't expect that from her. What did she tell John? Update...please! |