Fantastic fic. I love the premise, and I especially love the way you handled characterization.

FAN!

This is, without any doubt, the most incredible Lex/Zex fanfic I have ever read, and with the two being my OTP, I couldn't be happier. I may even go further and say that it is the best KH fanfic I have ever read. Your science and logic expands into but not beyond suspension of belief, your characters are completely in-character the whole time, the writing is splendid, the idea and structure is sound. It is a shame and a pity that this fic does not have more reviews.

The fact that the ending is bittersweet only further adds to the overall story and makes for a better propagation of the theme. So I applaud you for not having a sticky-sweet happy ending.

You are amazing. Don't doubt in your abilities. Good day to you~

Wow this was a seriously bittersweet fic. BUT I STILL LIKED IT !

Oh. Oh. This is so sad. I love how perfect their emotionless existence seems. Poor Zexion/Lexaus. :(

And you have deftly answered the question as to why for beings with no hearts Organisation 13 seem to have a lot of feelings- Its all Roxas' fault! Of course!

Interesting. Very interesting.

First of all, I'd like to complement you on the wonderful length of this oneshot.

Secondly: I'm not sure how to assess the validity of the hypothesis about Roxas's effect on people (I always attributed the displays of emotion to a little dramatic liscence taken by the creators) but it is certainly and intriguing concept, and fun to explore in this fic. Over all, I really liked it. My only qualm lies with the end; there wasn't much in the way of a sense of closing. It felt like the end to a chapter rather than a oneshot. Oh well.

LOVE IT~! BELIEVE IT~!