Reviews for Breaking Point |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This was unbeliveably disturbing and horrifying. It was definitely well written (because it literally made me sick to my stomach), but that is sadly the only good thing I can say about this chapter. If you wanted me to hate John then you succeeded. But I kind of doubt that was your intention ... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Your Sheppard is as bad as Zuggat. I have absolutely no empathy for him. |
![]() ![]() MAGNIFICENT! BRAVO! TERRIFIC! ::Terri claps her hands.:: It shows how far John would go for payback. It was very true to the character. On one episode, John told Teyla that he would do anything for his team, even Rodney. They also showed that he would do anything for espcially Rodney later on. This story was dead on with the characters. Many congrats. Terri |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow I won't be able to see John in the same light again... Well done got shivers up my spine in the torture scene E |
![]() ![]() ![]() Should i be disturbed that i find John's brutality way sweet and totally hot? loved it! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Chocolate Cheesecake! My fav! YAY! XD Love the ending! GO JOHN! THAT WAS THE BEST REVENGE EVER! XD Really awesome! I love how you discribe how John felt in the end (that he'd become a dark silent man who had grimly stalked the halls of Atlantis, planning revenge) just love it! And how have Rodney now and the bastard gone made thing better. I hope you do more like this one! So GREAT! ! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good ending for the bad guy. Good story. |
![]() ![]() glad you decided to continue it! awesome job can't wait to see what happens next |
![]() ![]() omg love it so far! great job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yipee - you added more! Really enjoyed the latest chapter and looking forward to the conclusion. Thanks! |
![]() ![]() I am so glad that you continued this story. You are correct. McKay warned that Sheppard would kill the Empir, and he should. Unfortunately, Sheppard will have to make it fast instead of slow. He would want to get back to Rodney. I'm looking forward to the next chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() YAY! So glad you decided to go on with this story! Another great chapter! Teyla, Carson...it's all good! Looking forward to the next chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh, wow! That was good! Rodney going through torture, but apologizing to the guy because Sheppard was going to kill him...wow! Going on to the next chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() All of us good writters hear the voices, they will not stop until you write. Still going good can't wait for next chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Poor Rodney. Rescued at last. I liked the story. |