Reviews for A Worse Fallout
Daddy's HQxx chapter 9 . 9/28/2019
how dare you make me sob my eyes out and it all be a dream! that was such a tear jerker!
Guest chapter 9 . 7/14/2019
Dang, I didn't think I could get so much.
CrazyCrimMind chapter 9 . 1/12/2014
Omgosh this made me cry. It was sooo sad
onetreefan chapter 9 . 7/28/2010
wow i can't believe it was all a dream! so good!
mamya chapter 9 . 11/21/2009
Really didn't expect that. but that was really good! great job!
PinkAngel17 chapter 9 . 11/20/2009
Wow, that was a twist! Diffaintly wasn't expecting that. But I really liked it! It was a great ending! Loved it! :)
JenRar chapter 9 . 11/20/2009
Oh Hah! Nice ending! :)
Leigh59 chapter 9 . 11/20/2009
sometimes dreams come true. you wrapped it up nicely even if your muse did leave you high and dry..
celticstarwolf chapter 9 . 11/20/2009
still a wonderful ending to the story just prefect thank you
emzypemzy chapter 9 . 11/20/2009
HOLY FREAKING CRAP! I think I may have just dislocated my jaw! I was reading this like: aw how lovely, great M/G loveage and B-A-M it was all a DREAM! A BLOOMING (for use of a better word) DREAM! :O :O...can you tell I was in shock? haha

And I then got all sad for Pen, no Morgan loveage and no baby and :((

But, you brought me right back into it with a good old HEA...not the emu kind ;P

FANTASTIC story...although if I could have shook you for that dream bit I would have..whattcha doing trying to give me a heart attack? lol
jevans47403 chapter 8 . 10/23/2009
Glad that he got her to open her eyes and see that it is really him and that she's getting that spark and zest for life back. Can't wait for more especially the others gang up on Strauss for what she put them and Penelope through.
jevans47403 chapter 7 . 10/23/2009
oh boy I can so see the fire in his eyes when he's demanding the nurse to take the restraints off of Pen's wrists. I'm glad he's not dead and that was wrong of Strauss to do that she should have known that something could go wrong especially how extremely connected Pen and Derek are to each other in a way even though they're married, but I can see her coming up with a way to do something like that on the show if Derek and Pen do ever get together. Great job.
Leigh59 chapter 8 . 10/2/2009
the talk was perfect and the ending just listening to his heart beat. priceless.
celticstarwolf chapter 8 . 10/1/2009
that was just beautiful hon i loved it more please
PinkAngel17 chapter 8 . 10/1/2009
Aw! So sweet and adorable and cute and just so sweet! I loved it! I'm glad she's getting better. Can't wait for more! :)
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