Please update soon it's such a good story already and I can't wait for the rest

haha Grimmy in pajama bottoms and messy hair ish hot :o thats really hawt lol x3

Not hafe bad... Can't wait for the naext chapter.

i like this so far...its pretty good but i say a bit of romance x3 would be oodles of noodles of fun :3

The idea isn't that original, and the character seems to be a bit of a Mary Sue (I'm such a hypocrite). Not that it'll be bad or anything, there are plenty of people who can pull it off.

I really like the Komako-Caballo connection, though. Good luck on writing, I hope it will turn out well!