HAHA! This one was soo funny! I like your humor. I hope you update soon.

I also wouldn't mind more Rose/Dimitri 'private' moments

So... did anyone adopt this story? :)

Good luck in the army (I'm Australian)... I think its really honourable that you're fighting for our country. Stay safe, and thank you... I assure you if you do join the army (or if you already have) so many people are grateful for what you're doing for our country

xx

Oh... Thought this was a one-shot anyways ;)

hehe lol that last bit made me giggle. I like the flirty Dimitri, but you need to make it only 19 left to go or I'll make you do 60 Rose. She'd done 31, and you wrote that she needed to do 29 more which makes 60. Sorry if I'm bein picky, but I've read other stories where people make similar mistakes and their readers report them for it. You're a brill writer so I wanted to warn ya xx

Hmmmm...it was good, better than most I see on here, but it seemed incomplete. Whether it'd be better as a one-shot or as one of those that's just meant to be a multichaptered story, I'm not sure. Maybe it's just me.

wow! i absolutely love it! it's great!

Hoorah i loved it.

Haha! So good! I loved it! It was cute, and they really seemed like THEM. i don't know if that makes sense to you, but yeah.

My favorite part was the very last line. "Dimitri Belikov just winked."

I must tell you, I giggled like a school girl, just picturing it.

Good job.

Sam.

Hot! I want to know what happens tomorrow!

was fab

i like this story/chapter!

Excuse me but you have some little mistakes in the title.

I just want to correct you.

you should write: "Когда я говорю подпрыгни, вы спрашиваете как высоко"

I know thats just a one shot but thats a really good beginning to a story. I say give it a go if you want, I would deffinetly read it. :)

PLEASE WRITE MORE!

loved the witty banter