Megatron’s Death was SPECTACULAR! And Primus do I love TC!

I think Swoop being a medic in fan fictions is standard issue now, like, it should be made into a cannon thing by Hasbro(or whatever company owns Transformers) because every single fic I've ever read that has Swoop in it, he is almost always a medic in training.

This was really good! I liked it; particularly the relationship that developed between Starscream and Swoop. I don't imagine that he'll be a loyal servant to this queen, a loyal follower; but not a servant... I hope that the offspring doesn't look too much like his father...

THis AU was absolutely fun for me, and I am eager to explore your universe. I really hope to read about what happened when Starscream showed up at the Nemesis with Slag and Ratchet in tow, and at least the beginnings of trying to get the 'cons under control and announce the new queen.

"Prowl and all his...Prowlness"
Terrific characterization of Starscream! Love your work!
Zynk

Putting a bookmark here as I think I'm all "Swooped out" and the bookmarks feature is missing.

It's looking awesome so far, though!

Only just found this story yesterday, but I found myself reading nonstop.

So much squee! I'll admit, even knowing it was an AU, it was a bit rough in the beginning, just jumping in and all, but you write so well and it is such a neat idea I just had to stick with it. And what an excellent payoff!

You may have just made Swoop/Starscream an OTP for me. I mean, really, I can only see it working with a mature Swoop like what you have, and maybe it only really works with the situation you have, but, but, they were so cute! And I love how this wasn't really a romance, but that affection still grew between them anyway. :3

I... I don't really know what else to say about it. :D It was overall a very awesome, well-put-together story, and is definitely insta-fave material. Thank you very much for writing and sharing it!

So, now I've got to read the other stories in this continuity. In the meantime, how long before Swoop and Starscream conquer the universe?

Grand writing, as always. I'm rather happy I left halfway until this fic was finished - the cliffhangers would have been murder on my nervous system.

And, as I remarked somewhere else: there's an amazing variety of ways not to say 'I love you'. That means, the ending left me in pure fangirly squee.

The perfect ending to a darn' near perfect story. Complex, complicated, emotionally truthful, and very satisfying indeed.

Lovely. Reminds me of reading good historical fiction: that's the exact parallel to Swoop's position. Scheme and plot so wisely as you must, dear queen, for all depend upon you ...

Well of course Megatron would get her with spark; what was the point, otherwise? Some heavy decisions ahead. When I get done with this and its sequel, I shall indeed read all 29 of your other stories. Preferably at once.

Non-con is extremely hard to work into fiction; it is the act of soul-destruction, and nothing, nothing, justifies it. I adore your solution. I also adored Swoop's (well, really, yours as well ...).

Ah, the feces get ready to impact the rotary air-movement device!

Good grief, dear writer, I hope never to become your personal enemy. Great plotting, superb nastiness on Megsy's part.